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Amera_Mee

Amera_Mee

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2023-02-06 BergabungGlobal
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  • Amera_Mee
    Amera_Mee7d
    Balas Ayverill

    Nop, he wasn't

    Except for a group of people: Astin, Jacob, and Damion thought simultaneously.
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    Balas Elsuika

    Hiro is the original body owner, the person whom Ryan took his place, aka the antagonist in his sister's novel.

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    Balas Beejay_D

    I see, dialogue sucks, you say? As for 2 chapters in 1, oh well, that happened cause I edited the first 10 chapters, and I added few additional details, but I couldn't add chapters in between so I have to resort to this method as simply merging them would have created a massive confusion.

    Ch 10 Ice cream
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    Balas 6BigBoneMeat9

    He isnt blind, he just sees the world differently compared to others.

    "Even though my level returned to back B-rank, my strength regressed considerably, and now I'm much weaker," Ryan contemplated as he skillfully dodged Josh's attacks, relying on his eyesight to predict where the attack was coming from.
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    Balas 6BigBoneMeat9

    Aura,

    Ryan's brain and body had received so much of a shock that he instinctively erased the source of the trauma.
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  • Amera_Mee
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    Berkomentar

    TFTc

    Ch 2 This shall be my last gift to you
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    Amera_Mee27d
    Berkomentar

    Demeaning

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    Eyes 2 times.

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    Lovely! TFTC.

    Ch 1 Prologue
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    Berkomentar

    Savouring her anxiety, he took hold of her arms, firmly, and removed her top.

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    emphasized isn't the right word. Try something more descriptive. also from, Luiza gave a cheeky litt... should be in a separate paragraph.

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    Her eyes squinted into a crescent moon, slowing... also, better to break the paragraph into 2.

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  • Amera_Mee
    Amera_Mee28d
    Berkomentar

    Let's Read.

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  • Amera_Mee
    Amera_Mee28d
    Balas Air_Ace

    Thanks Love!

    Ch 1 Her novel
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  • Amera_Mee
    Amera_Mee1mth
    Balas Air_Ace

    Thank You Love

    Ch 1 Her novel
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  • Amera_Mee
    Amera_Mee1mth
    Berkomentar

    Aight, chapters was good, thank you for baring with my nitpicking and poor grammar, and all, a piece of advice tho, avoid using the same word twice in the same paragraph, if you can't think of anything , you can always look for synonyms in Google and such, imma write the rest later, as of now TcFT and good luck. You can ask the rest in discord.

    Ch 1 The End of a Life
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    Berkomentar

    Suddenly, two gunshots resounded from Ray's behind and the bullets pierced through his ribs. Staggering from the sudden numbness and pain, his pursuit halted and he crashed head first on the ground. He moved his face bearing the pain and through his paralyzed body, and uncontrollable agony, he saw numerous people donned in black suits appearing from every possible corner of the house.

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    Recognizing the owner of the voice, Ray's face spun to it direction of the voice which had just echoed from behind. And there, standing at the gate was a face he was all too familiar with, it as none other then Sam, a devilish grin plastered on his below avrage face, clearly confessing himself as the cause of this tragedy.

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    "Would you look at that, I think this is the first time I've seen you cry." A sarcastic voice pierced through the silence which was previously dominated by the sound of tears falling on the cold hard floor of the entrance.

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    Lying in front of him were here his two little daughters and wife. Also it would be better to split paragraph into 3 for app users.

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