raizell24

well,we all had that thought, (more like few actually)...but u know, author have to find the easiest way to tie their mc with 'heroined' and what a good 'forced' way than making mc plan to be near them seems as the only option.i don't understand why all of them choose this path, i mean i can go with one totally unrelated to heroines or main cast and make mc tied with a new oc...that would be more interesting than playing the good guy with hheroines ho killed you at some point.

and that was the point, system said that such a goal is something it can help him to reach thus it used 'undoubtly'

so lets keep it short, mc who will suck to naruto and hold his hand in everything nearly helping him by holding naruto's rod to discover hinata cave....(i am a fan of naruto) but the point of fanfics is to make things interesting. what's the point of reading this?

lol it's like a plague, every work they put hand on shall turn rotten.(tho there was some great works but the majority you won't be able to pass 30chps)..thanks for the review so i won't wastetime on this.{kinda expected it to relate to jin-woo when it said shadow mage

in novels? yeah i know i've already been poisoned so much from those types, and if i know its just a translation i would ingore it because they are mostly trash.

well that's good, introducing new fml with good story is way better than handing a girl who will change just because he 'got better' even if that was unfortunately the reality...tfc

Review:2/5...those who gave 3 are surely random bots author created or simply horny teenagers who focused on smuts or love this kind of mc.I've stopped reading this waste at ch (10), The reason that many may found acceptable otherwise because the novel got the smuts they loved? The usual over-arrogant chinese type mc.But here's the catch, he acts like that only against 'males' while of course at the sight of a female body he became obediant little goody doing everything to please.Now i love romance but anything ntr, masochist, simp, taking ex-hoe as wives, or useless-emotionless relation is not my cup. As the synopsis show...the story is about a young man from our time who got transmigrated into the stone age? Whatever, by some twist he became the new head( their priest) of a small undeveloped tribe.Three points are what made me just drop this s*it called kingdom building themed novel. In 10 chps.The first is his actions with tia(first fml) who declared that he is her prey after catching him and he takes it with a pinch of salt even daring to say he liked her dominating him as the author shows at ch3 the mc asking her to get back to her fierce persona like when they mated in a lame excuse of conquest feeling. (Imagine feeling excited because your wife tells you 'you are nothing but a lowly prey to me, a triumph award...) Lol. of course if you got the same kink as him, Suc* it.The second is when tia and another 'male' member of the tribe were with him, this tia called the new leader, which is him(mc). by his name(Enzo) directly causing the male member to reprimands her stating that he(mc) should be adressed respectfully due to his position as a head(like priest,sir,lord, master...etc)...if mc just told him it is okay and she is permitted it will be normal for me. Yet what our chad of mc did when his mistress got scolded by the elder for his(mc) sake? He scolded the man coldly like any arrogant young master causing the latter to fall to his knees seeking forgiveness. (Ch3)Like bruh, he got the tribe by luck and they do respect him but as long as it isn't 'female'...the mc will of course view them as 'NPC's or even lower, Servants.The third point and the one my brain said to me "please have mercy on me and drop this sh*t".At one point mc have potato...yep a potato from a bag he got with the transmigration thing. He kinda cultivate it and cooked a few he got as sweet potatos. The tribe Members which lives mostly on meat found this new thing sweetly scented, soft and liked to get a taste ( they didn't cause he enjoyed it with his 'mistress' tia and told them to cultivate a farm so they could get it). Advantages of being a harem member...even for a shit*y mc.Well, some time later the previous head of the tribe met him and after giving him a report of their situation he asked to taste this new thing called potato. And here's a line from that chapter(10) describing Mc response.[ the previous head(sovita) asked ingratiatingly, "lord priest, can i taste the potatos?" Enzo looked disdainful and waved his hand, saying, "take them" After all, having served as priest, he felt a bit repelled by sovita's eagrness, as if he had no worldly experience at all. ]Now just reading this paragraph from ch 10 should give you a hint about what to come and what to expect from this mc.He did this to the man who saved him, gave him his own position, and show him the way to weild power...where he could be dead or worse, s*x doll for his mistress tia.At this point i come to a conclusion that author who made this simply worship pu*sy and made his mc a dog to serve those with it while playing *god* with the other unfortunate 'males' showing how mainly and dominant he is...i should be mentally unstable if i got through the other chapters even after this points. {Pun intended}(My toxic tolerance is kinda high after reading so much of this shi*ty type but even then i couldn't tank through this kind of mc).Like always it feels good to rant in a review after experiencing something awful like this. peace✌️

ironic how in reality those who suffer tends to be more nice to pets and all yet here a 9 yr old is becoming edgy to everyone

bro😂😂

i will, thanks bro