Alejandro_Tapia

How to waste a story with so much potential in just one chapter.

""Childhood friend" sounded so childish, just say, friend. I was embarrassed to read such a childish dialogue xd

To be honest, the story has been looking "stupid" for a while now, now it was a breaking point for me to leave, the logic the author uses is really stupid. no matter the decision, The logic it displays is really strange and not very entertaining.

Obviously we want more, author

died again, author

I don't know why the hell the app won't let me translate.

Money or not, it's not a problem, the problem is downloading the app and not being able to translate the chapters... That's it, what a shame.

The author has good ideas, but develops the story in a stupid way. The way he interprets situations or battles is incongruous.

Just senseless garbage, there is no purpose in the killing the protagonist does. No purpose in the violence he shows, not even an appeal of a psychopath. A hollow puppet.

Very childish dialogue and writing.