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this story is all over the place I can't understand anything I mean is the MC actually know the Plot or he just remembers some things of the plot because someone who remembers the plot of the serious will not associate himself with the targaryens because like all of them end up crazy as f*** and many things in this story are not explained properly so we don't know how powerful house Baretheon is and if his house is actually strong enough to interfere Targaryen politics right now

I hear you but what I'm trying to say is if she's suspicious about like that you know about her being faithful if they got married why doesn't he just marry a woman like Catelyn Stark I I mean she is very faithful woman and she's so religious that's she will not allow herself to even think about that as she will not be faithful or give birth to a bastard as she sees it as tha greatest sin

what are you talking about the great others were beaten by normal humans with some magic of course but still in the dragons going to be taken down by scorpions or using his hanma physique in train his body to be strong enough to throw Spear and take them down from the skies yeah just healing Factor will help but smart atoms for real

then give him accelerated healing Factor don't give him something that will make him essentially a god

please stop you're doing too much you gave him smart atoms why would you do that just having yujiro Hanma physique will be enough to be on top of that world I mean the guy could Dodge bullets survive explos tunk a lightning bolt kill at 5 m to 4 M tall ancient elephant take on a modern Army of the strongest Nation and make them surrender and giving him smart atoms is just too much and by the way still don't like his relationship with Ella he kind of subconsciously treat her like she's some kind of a w**** like he suspecting her of having disease and refraining from sleeping with her from where I'm looking these relationship is already damaged

why Ella is this stupid in this fanfic like she's another Luyana Stark like if anything happened to her there will be Harvey consequences like war between two great houses I don't know why would you change her personality like that I mean the OG version of her was great she have a strong will and great self-control I mean look at that version you want to so many hardships like her husband humiliating her publicly by going after another woman being held hostage by her father-in-law and all that teach you that she have great self-control and strong will to not do something impulsive and stupid like this like if you wanted an impulsive hot-headed girl you could have chosen lyanna Stark I'm sorry but I just can't see how you not going to end up destroying her character and making her another lyanna Stark a Lovestruck girl

can you please recommend me a Teen Wolf fanfiction is that actually good of course it is Si there is nearly non that are actually good most of them are BL Teen Wolf fanfiction or began good but end up turning into smut fanfiction

but she doesn't have anything to offer other than her looks she's not from a great house or a rich house she just pretty face other than that useless

yeah get rid of that chat gbt it's horrible I need it through my phone to the wall trying to read this and one more thing why include gods and other mythical creatures involving all all of those creatures he's just making the story more complicated and I'm 99% sure scratch that I'm 100% sure that sukuna is not the strongest cause anymore if God's and other mythical creatures exist probably even Gojo is not strong anymore and it's kind of stupid because if all of those guys actually exist how the hell the world is not destroyed aren't curses existence concentrated on a slaughtering people and bringing destruction and misery

I kind of understand him though because there are actually hundreds of Chinese fanfiction novels that are very racist and sexist and the racism is specially concentrated on black people I don't know why and most of them you can find them on Marvel and DC fanfiction genre so I kind of understand where he come from

the only suitable dragons are that you mentioned are cannibal and bronze Fury because gray ghosts is too small to actually have any significant role in the war and that's if he doesn't use some kind of magic to make him super large and Powerful the other way I see him possessing your dragon is by using some kind of blood magic to hatch an egg and enhance it with magic to make it happen strong enough to be suitable for him

where f*** is his dragon it's nearly 40 chapters or is he going to be dragonless Targaryen

yeah I thought you abandoned this fanfic anyway love ❤️ the fanfic and please🙏🙏 more chapters tomorrow 🥺

I'm not going to lie I read this fanfiction for 30 chapters but I cannot anymore writing style is so annoying to read please dialogue is so dramatic I mean I'm not saying I hate the story but is the writing style is definitely hard to ignore I'm sorry but I have to go to off my chest anyway I still enjoy your story but if you can try another style of writing like trying not to make everything happening story overly dramatic anyway that's all and still thanks for the chapter

I want more chapters give me more

More chapters please 🙏🙏🙏🙏😭😭😭

please give us more I wanted I'm already addicted

why the hell is the sword a short sword wasn't it going to be like a great sword or a long sword it looks like a short sword maybe you didn't find a great picture but still it doesn't look like a great sword or a long sword or a bastard sword 🤔🤔

is she dumb does she want a dance of the Dragons before it even begin she's crazy this will be a great mix of Blackfyre Rebellion and the dance of the dragons with her help the realm going to burn faster 🔥🔥🔥💀💀💀👍👍👌🤣🤣🤣🤣