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It's not that your writing isn't good. The story is one of the best. It's just that you need to improve your grammar a bit (According to me) Any way thank's for the chappter
2) "Y-yeah" (Reya) After that, Reya maintained quite a bit of distance from the stream Instead of writing this, you could have written. "Y-yeah" Reya stuttered and after that, she maintained quite a bit of distance from the stream.
There's a flaw in your writing style. 1) "Y-yeah" (Reya) Instead of that you could have written. --] "Y-yeah" Reya stuttered.
I do have a suggetion