XunKun

should have gone with Iruma, He unlocked mastered ultra instinct even before he attended babylos as a normal human being with no cheats or magic or any other energy type system whatsoever.

the exaggeration of this one is off the charts

I would've instantly drop a 1 star review if ever the MC's name is Adam, I've had enough of Adam on the entirety of these self inserts FFs. don't even get me started with Alex

tf you on bruh? that makes even less sense than this paragraph implying that she 'WAS' the captain of the familia.

what's with the MOBA terminology?

why use past tense?

hey man, I just wanted to say that sharing an is overrated, and would definitely be a turn off if it is implemented. Also 1 request, can you focus on perfecting 1 abilities at a time and not like give the mc multitudes of abilities that will definitely be unused and forgotten. p.s. I haven't read any chaps yet, I read the synopsis and I have a vivid idea where this is going.

fun fact! those that writes like this with their mc being able to pull bitches at a glance don't have any bitches whatsoever and is infact a forever virgin, especially those that writes harems and read harems.

of course