ngl, this was a decent-good story... but the monologues and dialogues of this book was cringed asf... I don't know if it's just me but the dialogue between characters was off. Not exactly bad, but the flow was off for me... But still other than that it was an enjoyable read.

btw. Great story so far

Ohh ok. I thought it will be the same where they signed him mid playoffs cause from what I know you can't sign players while the team was still playing in the playoffs.

I thought you can't trade past trade deadline which was on February? How will you trade someone then?

The one who you should be pointing your anger was Kishimoto. He just leave so many plot holes in the whole series that it makes his other characters like Hiruzen look bad.

Pretty sure in his prime, Hiruzen will wipe Tobirama. He was called the God of Shinobi for a reason. The only one who had the same title like his was Hashirama.

Now, this was just straight up hating. No sense in puting it there.

Not really defending Hiruzen here, but from what I know Hiruzen singlehandedly stall Kurama when he was rampaging until Minato arrived, who was at that time was delayed due to Obito.So saying that his efforts in the Kyubi incident was lackluster was nonsense. Even though he was not a great hokage for sure, but he wasn't bad per se.

The more you paint her as a great girl, The more it became clear that she's overrated.

was this an AU or it's like back in the past with the same history?Cause from what I know Chris Evans was already well known especially when he played Human Torch in fantastic four?

Thanks for the love man! I really appreciate it Don't worry if I can have more time next year I will comeback with a rewrite or a new story.

Thanks man! If you really wanted to write just go gor it. For me the hardest part of writing was starting.

whoa! I didn't know the goat was following my story. love your book man🥰