Shouldn't Tengen be able to sense Kenjaku inside his barriers. Then how did Kenjaku got hold of the old man and even if he did get hold of the old man shouldn't Tengen do something about it?

Let her die

Kill him

This is an interesting idea and i liked the first chapter very much. Please don't drop this fic.

It's fine man just remember to kill someone the next time the mc uses kamui. Btw will the mc go blind because of mangekyou or he will just use reverse cursed technique to heal his eyes negating the damage done to his eyes?

If we see everyone dodging kamui it will be like amterasu which we are told is powerful but everyone dodges it and uraume is not that important to the plot anyway.

Man I get that you can't have mc kill kenjaku but you could atleast kill uraume to show that kamui is no joke and the mc is not holding his punches.

Can you make a dorne pov?

The story is pretty good so far and the update stability is awesome. I like the mc is not all sunshine and rainbows and is not afraid to get his hand dirty.

When will the next chapter come out?

+1

Btw will the mc have mangekyou sharingan? If yes what will be his mangekyou abilities?

Man love your story. Btw what is the update schedule?

I like this story and like how mc is not afraid of killing but the mc sometimes feels like a side character except that everything is great. Keep up the good work 👍👍

You will see it all in the flashbacks as the story progresses

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Yeah a bit more conflict would be good but I think it was good. Perhaps in one of the next chapters you can show how they don't trust each other and are continuously fighting among themselves even during battle. By the way love your work.

Keep it