Pix3L

The story is overall pretty good, I mainly don't like the vague description of items and his spirits and even some people thats whyy I wanted to look to see if you have a discord somewhere with illustrations but the link is expired unfortunately.

There is a big problem here the first guy is obviously passionate about the restaurant and cooking so he works hard to be a success , I would work hard about something I'm passionate about as well school just isn't one of them so why waste time on something I don't care about when I could focus on stuff I actually want to put work into

I ding hate growth type weapons in stories man yeah they are basically the best and that's the problem you make this multiversal shop with millions of weapons just to give him a growth type weapon so he basically can say fuck you to every other weapon and never use anything else

Personally I despise them I get to see the MC or someone I like fight for like 5 min and then watch 20 eps of useless characters I don't care about

Bro ski and what are you a loner with no friends have you never wanted to help out a friend you treat as your own brother

Bro author I remeber in your last work you genderbent the MC I hope that weird shit won't happen here

The fact that you are sexualizing kids being selfish is the crazy part

Why in every ff every MC goes for a short sword or a knife bro like there are hundreds of different swords you could choose

ND the reason was because he is an idiot who apparently doesn't have a mouth to speak

Not a big fan of this i don't know if it's a translation or not everything happens way too fast, character interaction is one dimensional, they don't feel like real people