sholo_bolo
I almost have an addiction to reading novels and I'm also very nitpiky about what I read. Dumb MCs are one of the things that irritate me the most.
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sholo_bolo4hBerkomentarforgot the description of the mod that gives you a backstory?
Wasn't this just a mod? Why is it like this? I have a relative? I have a mother?- sholo_bolo5hBerkomentar
keep both, but please make his monologues less cringe
I really wanted to ask whether or not should I continue writing in multiple POVs (between 1st and 3rd) or should I just make it only 3rd person. Leave a suggestion at the comment section. - sholo_bolo5hBerkomentar
please don't keep the cringe up the whole novel. Let his speech row up with time
"'DARE' IS MY SURNAME F*CKEEEEER!!" - sholo_bolo6hBalas meyercody50
not sure why a child's body will make his brain twist from a word? also it sounds really annoying like he thinks he's so special that the word "dare" insults him that much
"'DARE' IS MY... - sholo_bolo8hBalas Reaper_X_7998
I will hundred percent support you! (I need test subjects to experiment with this first)
I suddenly realized that I am not aware of the track of time anymore. - sholo_bolo10hBerkomentar
bro is not reaching home
Now, I am ready to hit the road home. I also should stop thinking about playing so much. that can be considered raising a flag too. - sholo_bolo8dBerkomentar
the germans and the roman empire
The capital of Great Zhao was originally in the north and had been at odds with the barbarians for 800 years. In the end, the foreign races were powerful, and the Emperor of Great Zhao ordered the entire imperial court to move to the south. He established the capital in Lin'an and temporarily avoided them. - sholo_bolo9dBalas Master_Atlest
at the start of the novel, his eldest son was 15 and he was 30. do the math
Ye Xiaoxiao screamed in protest, unwilling to leave. She was only fifteen at the time. - sholo_bolo9dBalas JesusXChrist
as he gets stronger, he will be busy producing more expensive ones, so he wouldn't have the time to make the other ones.
Why not just sell the prescription to Wang Fu for a large sum of money?! - sholo_bolo9dBerkomentar
so having a wife delivered to your door, who agreed due to desperation, doesn't affect the "modern man" mindset?
As a modern man, Ye Fan didn't have the 'what's mine is yours' mindset. - sholo_bolo11dBalas KVCD13
you thought ancient China had women's rights?
"Little Fan, she'll be yours from here on. Make sure to treat her well," said Wang Dong, before turning around and leaving. - sholo_bolo18dBalas Jamal_Bando
i mean i like to expect good things from novels i start reading, guess it's just my fault
Ning Yuan smiled at the determination etched in Qin Chen's face. This was what she admired about him - Qin Chen was not easily defeated and harbored a high spirit. - sholo_bolo18dBalas Rubens_Junior
lol I was just commenting the thing you said people are gonna comment. it was just to spite you
"To be honest, I didn't want to interrupt the battle of the two strongest, it's not noble, but... I think now none of you is worthy of that title," feeling my newly acquired strength, I challenged these two guys. - sholo_bolo20dBalas The_Dark_Sapphire
bro is the main character lol
Leaving aside the lack of any resemblance in appearance, their auras were also completely different. Mr. Bai's beauty was the kind that once seen, could never be forgotten. Most importantly, the kindness and amiability that Mr. Bai unintentionally revealed could not be disguised. It was entirely different from the mysterious and unpredictable demeanor of the "Heavenly Doctor." - sholo_bolo20dBerkomentar
finally a male jade beauty
A slightly weak aura, but the face was flawless, stunningly beautiful as if gathering all the love of heaven and earth. In Li Fan's mind, there were only thoughts like, "How can there be such a good-looking person under the heavens and earth?" or "It's a pity this person is not a woman." - sholo_bolo21dBalas Fersuremaybe_k
the only reason I love this novel, it's a cultivation novel in a fun setting with an actually smart mc
"Moreover, I can let others cultivate this method, and I'll profit from their efforts." - sholo_bolo21dBalas Rubens_Junior
you are gojo fan thats why youre making this
"To be honest, I didn't want to interrupt the battle of the two strongest, it's not noble, but... I think now none of you is worthy of that title," feeling my newly acquired strength, I challenged these two guys. - sholo_bolo21dBalas Sin_of_sloth
mc in Shibuya
Gray clouds stretched across the entire expanse of Japan, foreboding something truly dreadful. - sholo_bolo21dBalas IHaveNoNamingSense
- sholo_bolo21dBalas Lotmlover911
called a joke
She put on blusher, her lips like cherry powder. When she whispered in his ear, a delicate and youthful breath teased at Fang Yuan's earlobe. Because she was sitting on his lap, Fang Yuan could feel her well-shaped figure easily. Her elastic thighs, her slender little waist and her soft chest.