sholo_bolo
I almost have an addiction to reading novels and I'm also very nitpiky about what I read. Dumb MCs are one of the things that irritate me the most.
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sholo_bolo1dBerkomentarNi**asaurus is a better name for him
Rhaegar grinned. "Cannibal likes the name, and so do I. It suits his dark nature, devouring all light."- sholo_bolo1dBalas CarefeeDaoist
no he's not? he's not a transmigrated MC, he gets glimpses of our worlds through his dream, but he is the actual 6 years old character
"Another nightmare..." he muttered through clenched teeth, tears welling up in the corners of his eyes as he clenched his fists against the agony coursing through him. - sholo_bolo1dBerkomentar
nah they brought it a storage ring from cultivation novels 💀
[Space Bracelet] Grade: Excellent (Blue) Function: The inside of the bracelet contains three cubic meters of space. It cannot contain living beings. Evaluation: "This is a magical artifact dating back to the ancient Valyrian era, and its spatial attributes make it so valuable that even the noble Dragon Lords are seeking it out!" - sholo_bolo1dBalas IndolentFish
I actually flipped the phone and read it, aizen ain't got nothing on me
So, it was better to cooperate with the cat and make it fat and lazy. - sholo_bolo1dBalas Fuad_Salad
but he lacks the melanin
Rhaegar replied matter-of-factly, "My age limits my wisdom, but books inspire my knowledge." - sholo_bolo2dBerkomentar
biggest cap of the entire novel
[Luck: Level 2] - sholo_bolo2dBerkomentar
all the math geniuses over in the comments fr. the 10X means what she got times 10. meaning, the increase in physical strength that she got from the potion, he got 10 times the increase. imagine her physical strength is at 10 and this potion increases it by 2, making her strength 12. but due to the 10x, MC gets 20 increase as 2x10=20. suppose his strength is at 2, now his strength would be 22. ionno where you guys are getting the 1x and 0 increases from
[Ding! Permanent 10x increase in Physical Strength!] - sholo_bolo2dBalas TheOneTrueLoki
difference between seeing something happen in a movie, which you can replicate, and reading it which was probably not written in that much detail in the first place
"If I know from the novel correctly, near the oak tree at the western area of the clan, there should be a huge rock, and 29 steps away from it just beneath the ground should be something that could greatly benefit Nadia." - sholo_bolo2dBalas MDN_
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He felt that perhaps the clan guardian had grown senile. - sholo_bolo2dBalas IndolentFish
I red the first line first, I outsmarted aizen fr
So, it was better to cooperate with the cat and make it fat and lazy. - sholo_bolo2dBalas Ever_What_3945
pretty simple I think. He emitted great power, which if trained properly will make him very powerful later on, and with his on humanity's side, demons will be suppressed and the fighting will stop, if either because the demons take initiative in making peace due to fear or they're just all killed
She decides to take the risk; if she can nurture him properly, he might become the key to putting an end to this everlasting war between exorcists and demons forever. - sholo_bolo2dBalas Karma_shi
for light, his death note I think qualifies as having great power, cause that's what allowed him to make such an impact in his world along with his brain, so basically what it's saying here.
The clan believed in power; intelligence is necessary but as a tool only. As long as you are intelligent enough to properly use your immense powers, you can crush someone who is extraordinarily smart easily. - sholo_bolo2dBalas REFO
"forgive them" he doesn't even bear a grudge against them, at least not big enough for him to go against them. he understands that he is useless without the system, so he is content with just sitting around
"I think I would need to take on the role of babysitter myself… I cannot trust anyone else with this." - sholo_bolo2dBalas Sammy_Amigo
his training isn't gonna do anything anyway, low talent .also he gets 10x the progress of one of the greatest geniuses in the world, his mesely training isnt gonna do much against that
He felt excited as he obtained a 10x stronger version of the Abyss eyes. - sholo_bolo2dBerkomentar
I always wanted under, in these novels where you can see the colorful particles in the air, wouldn't that obstruct your vision? like it's literally colorful smoke with the way it's describes, so you constantly see colorful smoke in the air yet you can perceive every detail in your surroundings? counterintuitive
Espera. - sholo_bolo2dBalas DaoistYellowBird
because that implies that his beliefs are the best and the beliefs of others don't matter. which is just never a good thing
That would be too hypocritical of him to impose his beliefs onto others. - sholo_bolo2dBalas Horton_Hears_a_Jew
there's a difference between things not having to be realistic and things not making sense. the latter means the author is a bad writer, no excuse
As her eyes moved to the center, she looked at him, Oliver, a boy who suddenly barged into her daily life, claiming to be her unknown brother from the same mother. - sholo_bolo4dBerkomentar
bros been swearing a lotta things in quick succession these past paragraphs as if they don't mean shi
Yet I won't disgrace all those who carried that amulet before me. I swear on that. Even if I am not the 'Hero' of the game, I will be the strongest. - sholo_bolo7dBerkomentar
forgot the description of the mod that gives you a backstory?
Wasn't this just a mod? Why is it like this? I have a relative? I have a mother? - sholo_bolo7dBerkomentar
keep both, but please make his monologues less cringe
I really wanted to ask whether or not should I continue writing in multiple POVs (between 1st and 3rd) or should I just make it only 3rd person. Leave a suggestion at the comment section.