Will there be romance in this story? Yes, the Incubus system will lead to a harem, as he'll need to form connections with ladies while completing tasks. Don't worry, though, these romantic relationships won't overshadow the MC's growth and journey. While the MC will form connections with various ladies, these relationships will also come with challenges and character-building opportunities that align with the story's overall arc. I aim to strike a balance between romance and personal growth, ensuring that both aspects enrich the narrative without overshadowing the MC's primary goals. Your input is valuable, and I'll keep it in mind as I continue writing.

Well-done [img=recommend][img=strong]

Do u wanna be part of the mc world?[img=proud] We'll welcome you with open arms[img=update]

Thank you for reading. So, you don't mind him being totally evil with no ounce of goodness in him? Don't forget that he's the mc. I'm trying to limit this for you dear readers so that the story won't be so dark.

I see nothing wrong with this chapter. Description was on point, I'll continue reading.

There will be minimal romance. The MC was a playboy while he was in Britain [img=proud] How many chps have u read? Rate it.

I didn't even notice this here. No notification for it. So, about harem ...hmmm. It's in between.

Of course, as the Author of the book, I would give a biased review.[img=proud] To answer any of the questions piling up in your mind when you read or saw the synopsis/book cover. You have no choice, dear, you just have to read it.[img=Speechless] Because if you don't, the questions will disturb you and you won't be able to sleep. Now, would you like tossing around in bed just because you refused to read? No, right?[img=faceslap] Now, a little serious. I'm a new writer open to all respectful criticism but while you give the criticism, please note that I'm the author and your opinions will still be subjected to my reasoning first before I can decide whether to alter the story in any way. Alright, safe reading.

Interesting, but you need to correct some errors. Edit it to fit the usage of past tense in the beginning.

I love this. I'd be here for a while, I might get a coke or a better seat when you get contracted

This novel is exactly my go to for contemporary romance, the author sure knows her genre well. Also Congratulations on winning the wpc, sorry it came lateᕙ⁠(⁠⇀⁠‸⁠↼⁠‶⁠)⁠ᕗ

Sorry, that was an error. I've fixed it.

You are welcome.

I just wrote the synopsis there. I plan to write something there later, and I want it to be the first thing my readers will see, that's why I left out the first chp as a synopsis, for now.

I'm having a problem with reading for now, but I think your book should be great. I only wrote this review to advise you about your book cover, having a book cover will also aid in attracting readers. There are many ways to get a book cover now if you don't have the money to get a customized one, through Pinterest or AI generated. If you got a laptop, use Microsoft Bing with a good prompt of how you want your book cover to be but first start with "generate a picture for me" or you can search on Pinterest for a preferable book cover you'll like. If you are having a hard time getting this right, you can message me on discord 'debbie_06'. I'm only a writer trying to help out another writer because I've also been helped by other writers. Happy writing#

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