Please improve ur style 🥲🥲🥲so much pain im suffering due over extra info in extra pov novel🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲🥲

Bruh thats a pastor

Every thing is good except the way stretch a simple chapter into a complicated one.... bruh I got it that u want a goof world build, but it's just too much man u just gives info of 1 villain for 2 chapters n in third chapter he'll just die!! What is the freaking reason is there to give so much elaborate character, it's not even helping in world building, it just make it really boring, a simple 3 chapter arc is stretch out to 30 chapters just because of some nonsense, and what the freak is DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DI E DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE 30X what is this bruh ... just fill up the pages u do this isn't is too greedy of you

Keyboard immortal copy......moto to be helped you are forgetting to be helped you are forgetting to be helped you are forgetting to be helped you are forgetting to be helped you are forgetting to be helped you are forgetting to be helped you are forgetting to be helped you are forgetting to be helped you are forgetting to be helped

I hate u ... u know u focus too much of world background n stray away from the main plot. I have read ur 3 books n all have to much filler chapter. man u r a pervert. why the u do this

Bro u r wrong, because the name of tht chapters is legendary rank😂😂.. it's a error made by author... he forgot tht fog was already legendary rnk

Wao so boring. So rushed . So tastless............m...mm...m..mm.m..mmm..mm.mm........mm...mm..mmmmmmmmm.mm.mm..m..mm.mm..mm..m..m..m..m..m..m..m..m..m..m...m..m.......m....................................

Hi.....my fellow daoist , after completing this I would like to write some experience of mine in reading this novel. Grammer is 4/5 Story is 5/5 World background 5/5 I believe lot of u be thinking that's my ratings r bullcarp because it is a 3.7 star rated novel in webnove, but belive me there r some boring part but if u have patience n crossed tht section, there awaits a really beautiful n engaging story. As some of reviewers has wrote tht mc conceals his strength without any reason, it's not ture , the actual reason y he conceals his strength is because by conceal his strength n only using schemes gives him more reward from his system. It's really good try it with patience 😌

Finishing the 1st chapter is the biggest challenge, it's too boring n I can't continue to read it🥲... can someone tell me how much chapter should I skip to reach interesting part?

Up to chapter 43 it was good, but after that nationalism become too much. It's like except China all other countries r evil sect n only China is righteous sect.. complete bullcrap...

Go read I hate system novel... n u will know y he hate it

Overall a good novel, but the main problem is the romance section of this novel, as it look like romance was forcefully inserted into non-romantic novel, if the Valera romance section were not included it would have been even better..

Big loop hole , Mc have arcane art he can become small as ant how can he not pass by small hole.

I only have one thing that i disagree with u, n that is I would do my best to reach the top existence. I wouldn't stop even if i reached the top ill break every shackles that will try to prevent me from reaching top, btw love would be the strongest enemy between me n the top n im sure of it......

Man this novel is good but too much extra useless info about cards that r not gonna used in later chapters. And was it necessary to make fmc a slut who have army of sex friends. It would have been enough if she had 3 or 4 ex boyfriends. Y make her thot, man it's quite disturbing. And translation is btw

People who think this mc is a good mc with good heart, than u r wrong bruh..... the more I read the more I know that he doesn't care who will get killed by his action in achieving his goals, the hell, he starts multiverse lvl war just to Increase his power, except humans all other living beings good or bad r only seen as food for him. He is pure humanist, he'll he even kills beauty's to eat them if they r not human........

I can see the overwhelming hardwork n passion of author in this novel. This type of passion is all I ask from a novel writers . .. definitely 5 stars for this novel .................🙃🙃🙃

Yo, pan u still focus too much on details instead of the story. Your story is good for people who don't have any other works except reading novels all day , but most of the people who have tons n tons of work in their daily life , ur story progression is too slow, maximum ppl will leave after watching 200 to 300 chapters of a particular novel whose progress speed is slow as snail....... pls ponder on my words

I dont know how good this novel is...... it might be no.1 novel or anything else but I'm not gonna read it because of 1 single brainless n brain death reason, n that is.....:- THE MC IS FMC/ FEMALE. As a male I can't imagine being a female. I'm just not able to emerge myself into this novel sorry but can't watch it even though I want to watch it

So many writing mistakes eg- for killing heaven stage 1 u first said it gives 10000 points but in chapter 222 u said it only give 1000 its bullshit. So do u want to say that killing earth stage 1 gives 100 points n mortal 1 points wtf writing mistake nonsense mood bumper