RSmooth
Amateur novelist.
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Well, I thought I'll make them young and inexperienced. Most of them are around 20 and Chain is the oldest (23 years old). As the story continues, they will mature over time.
Just hold on a bit longer. You will see why her character is like this as I will plan later on to explain her character's backgrounds and others too.
Don't worry, she'll mature over time and get a better understanding of her later on.
The dropship landed and they got out of it from there. I see what you mean. I'll remember not to forget to include these kinds of details.
Thanks for reading it and giving me your opinion. It's my first time ever writing a novel so I know I would make mistakes along the way in my writing and it won't be to everyone's liking. I aim to improve my work each time I release a chapter and me being a small author means not many people will encounter my work and I wouldn't be able to tell how my readers enjoy the novel since most don't leave a comment or a review so this comment helps me a lot and by better understanding the minds of my readers, so thank you :)