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Kinda. Actually it was some kind of pseudo enuncia, designed to be able used by Astartes and to some extent mortal safely.
I can relate to that. actually, AI writting on third person pov are not that problematic.
I see. I can't blame you for that. I can save much of my time by using it. Actually I can write it with the same flowery language as this. But the structure is not proper enough to build up the tense. What can I say. English is my third language. But fun fact, I found the AI edit is... lacking for my taste. That is why, I choose to use AI to edit the structure and find appropriate flowerly language for the build up. The rest like the build up, characters' dialogue, the writting style are mine.
The Big E knows that. But he want to burn away any innocents left. He knew the price to pay. Moreover, he possessed total control over the entire planet via Lothens's newly created program and the true color of the Primordial Annihilators would be still a secret for the rest of the Old Earth.
Can you elaborate?
Spoiler alert: If you count major armory worlds in the Webway and the real space, you would have in the billions or maybe tens of billions
Imagine like this. Cohorts is 100.000 strong Auxilia. Battalions is 1.000 and company is 100.
Ok. I will make my comment here. But keep it mind, it was your work so I will appreciate it. But I will make some correction about the power scale. If you are referred to physical hivemind, Saiyans can defeat them. But the actual hivemind they can't. It can twist higher dimensional plane with ease and certainly stronger than even nameless warp creature in the Warp that can destroy and create universes with a thought alone. And, even you managed to destroy the physical body of the hivemind, the hivemind in the warp is still alive and if you want to kill it, you will need power infintely stronger than Zen-Oh because there are literally infinite amount of beings in the warp capable performing what Zen-O and super shen long did in the DB series. Ah, keep it in mind that Warp creatures in the material universe are just avatars of their true forms, infinitly small version. Why I repeated the concept of intinite several times. Because the creature of warp can manipulate their dimensionality at their woll. Becoming 3 dimensional being to 20 dimensional being are child's play for them. but again, it is your works. You can anything your want, but consider this as fyi.
I don't say I read the entire 1000 books of Warhammer series. I'm in Warhammer for more than 6 years. I at least read dozens or more. And fortunately, I have several friends to give me the title for me to read in order to get me the whole picture.For example, there are beings that exist in beyond the Warp. And there is theory that pretty much makes sense due to many of its description and many people does not aware of, that is Warhammer series potentially, has a supreme being that held the entire creation(The Warp, Materium, Atheric Void, etc) in order.
enough to at least got what I wanted and the full picture
I suggest you to read my story in detailed motion. I never want to reveal Logos and their power as soon as possible. But about This AU Adeptus Astartes and the Primarch. I have mentioned it several times in my story. Primarch in this AU is essentially leader of the Space Marine Legion. So no. This AU Primarch≠Logos. They are completely different on the fundamental level.
Hmmm... I can't answer that outright. But consider this. This AU Imperium possess many psi tech from Aeldari. And im the lore, a group of Asuryani priests alone managed to forged sword from the literal concept of the death force of the entire universe.Think that as a consideration.