Kydul1137
I love writing more than I like reading and I love gundams, dragons, demons and gods. That is all. My alt account is “Tetsuno_DGB”
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I knowwww the story has cool ideas but the actual story is bad, that’s why I stopped🥲
Tried to make more ancient plot twist; like the true beginning to everything, the origin of everything. I thought it was a cool idea
Liking the new lore?
No, he made sure not to kill them
Well, it is a card game I created some time ago. But you don’t play character cards, only elemental spells, while you have your character card with natures limiting the spells you can use
The story has promise, the writing quality is good, and the fact that it is Vikings and not your basic reincarnation/system story is a breath of fresh air. I enjoyed reading this and I hope it is continued, I think it has potential and most people would enjoy this story. Please keep up the great work, author!
My only critique is to add detail of surrounding. Example, what kind of house were they in, or where did this take place? What setting was it? How many and what kind of people were around? What kind of lighting is it? Torches of firelight casting dancing shadows, or rays of light through a window? Etc. Just surrounding details, other than that there are no critiques I have
Interesting. So no magic, only physical enhancemen t
This is giving me FableHaven vibes