Idk honestly, i paused becuz the commitment for a contract was too much, i just need things to get slightly better before taking this back up.You got my word. Got any improvements that i can make?( Most prob publish chapters but i wont apply for a contract)

he is apart of one of the great family's

No he is 5 years

New chapte rout

New chapter out

Thanks man

Thanks man, that makes my day

New chapter out

New chapter out

Is the chapter length fine?

Yup, he will

new chapter up btw

Selfish yes, Power hungry ig i mean he will get power if he disrupts the og mc, you will understand in the near future chapters

nah he wont currently from the plan i sketched out, maybe if readers feel that he is a bit too cold or ruthless then il change it, but for now nah thanks man for commenting btw it made my day seeing that someone reads my chapter:)

Is the chapter size okay?

Dropped cuz i messed up the plot, il do it correctly in the next novel (PS: if you want me to change my mind then leave few comments that would motivate me otherwise expect a new novel coming out in the next few days)

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hey there could you also check out The Rule Of The Voider I would much appreciate it, also this is just to spread my novel abit. No offense to the author of this story too( if you dislike me trying to spread my novel just msg me and il delete this msg thank

hey there could you also check out The Rule Of The Voider I would much appreciate it, also this is just to spread my novel abit. No offense to the author of this story too( if you dislike me trying to spread my novel just msg me and il delete this msg thank

hey there could you also check out The Rule Of The Voider I would much appreciate it, also this is just to spread my novel abit. No offense to the author of this story too( if you dislike me trying to spread my novel just msg me and il delete this msg thank you