john_johnson_2651

The short chapters doesn’t encourage me to read more

Preferred your draft, that was good why did you start over

You just had to spoil it, a time skip would have been better

I know you hate dumbledor from all your novels but the way this chapter ends doesn’t feel right. He isn’t in his own world, why transfer the hate and leave him to die.

Supreme level trash.

Can’t read anymore. I’m out. You started well but it has gone to shit.

Lately it seems like a different person is writing the novel.

Get to the point. Kmt

You suck!!

Can you stop the removing chakra plot. So he takes away all the chakra, what then. Humans will still go to war chakra or no chakra. It’s just annoying at this point.