Veryl
I'm a quiet person that loves writing, I love slowburn yaoi and bl as i can truly feel comfortable reading something related to my sexuality, check me on here: https://www.instagram.com/veryl_owo/
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I need a proof reader couse english it's not my first language and even if i can write somewhat well, i can't tell how it sounds and if it's clear to the read
You're helping me a bunch... one more chapter and i'll go through them to check everything is in place, thanks a lot
So... i know is still a little to early to give a review, but since i liked the story imma give my opinion. The writing style is very descriptive and fluid, i loved how you described the moments about his past with quick flashbacks or windows on the past, as for the tecnical part there were no huge grammar mistakes that i could see, maybe a misspelling or two but appart from that i really liked it, hope for a new chapter OwO!
I can already feel their pain if they drink 3 to 4 bottles a day, poor fluff...qwq