GodlyN
A Non-existent persona
Tulisan
membaca
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Membaca buku-buku
Lencana
7Momen
27
GodlyN2yrBerkomentarCh 1 Flame of Power [I]- GodlyN2yrBerkomentarCh 1 dropped
- GodlyN2yrBalas MistofOblivionCh 27 Chapter 27 - Life Return Final Form!
- GodlyN2yrBalas HolyJoker
oww sorry, sorry hehehe. thank you. i like the story by the way, keep it up 😁
"Yeah, this is kinda bad," Max admitted, even he seemed a little nervous now. But his Conqueror's Haki flew out like a wave, knocking out all of the fishmen underwater and those that had also attacked the ship. "Binz!! Use your Grow-Grow Fruit to patch the holes in the ship! Ain you stop any cannonballs from hitting the ship. Raynare, Negan, you are with me, it's time to take the fight to them." - GodlyN2yrBerkomentar
Ain't Binz died in the previous chapter, senpai?
"Yeah, this is kinda bad," Max admitted, even he seemed a little nervous now. But his Conqueror's Haki flew out like a wave, knocking out all of the fishmen underwater and those that had also attacked the ship. "Binz!! Use your Grow-Grow Fruit to patch the holes in the ship! Ain you stop any cannonballs from hitting the ship. Raynare, Negan, you are with me, it's time to take the fight to them." - GodlyN2yrBerkomentar
See this! I just gifted the story: Grimoire
Bab ini telah dihapus. - GodlyN3yrDiterbitkan
After reading the synopsis and five chapters of this really hook me up... Firstly, its visualize storytelling makes me imagine it like I am there. secondly, the way the story makes it more engaging as it goes. Thirdly, I have some chapters that have to read so I'll add additional ones after I read them all. Keep it up, Author!
Buku ini telah dihapus. - GodlyN3yrBerkomentarCh 1 dropped
- GodlyN3yrBerkomentarCh 1 dropped
- GodlyN3yrBerkomentarCh 1 dropped
- GodlyN3yrBerkomentarCh 1 Our First Meeting
- GodlyN3yrBalas proking
Thank You! I'll keep that in mind, freely comment on any wrong grammar I have that can confuse readers. I'll try to be much better. Thank You again! it means a lot to me.
Bab ini telah dihapus. - GodlyN3yrBalas CaptainChaos0301
Red meat that keeps beating in the center of your ribcage?
Bab ini telah dihapus. - GodlyN3yrBalas CaptainChaos0301
- GodlyN3yrBerkomentar
Fixed! Please if any of you found any wrong grammar just comment it and i'll gladly fix it immediately. Thank You very much for support ! (θ‿θ)
Bab ini telah dihapus. - GodlyN3yrBerkomentar
Fixed! Please if you found any wrong grammar and anything that you want to suggest, critics, and etc. Just comment it and ill try my best to follow and correct it. Thank You! (◠‿◕)
Bab ini telah dihapus. - GodlyN3yrBalas CaptainChaos0301
I flex my own work to you cause i thought we have the same novel that have a blackened character in it, didn't thought it would come to this. This is the first time that i flex my own work to be recognized by the writer of the novel that i admired a little. Really unexpected to me, I guess im way too straightforward then.
- GodlyN3yrBalas CaptainChaos0301
About the fan person thing, i really like your story. I just express my opinion there, don't know how it become like that to you. I didn't even say im a fan, i just say i will read it to satisfy my curiosity about the powerful protagonist you have there. Seeing you can write a good novel that I express my willingness to give you my work and review it, just wanting a suggestions and criticism to improve it.