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An idiot who will be the next "King Arthur" who has just gone to another world sets out to "save" another idiot to die and be revived as a slave, what a piece of shit.

cowardly and useless protagonist. The mc is a shit who is terrified of tangshit. Apart from the fact that the powers that the system gives him are quite weak compared to the originals.

The mc is a fucking rap*st, I don't understand how there are people who like this shit [img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad]

this fic has a lot of yuri... F[img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad][img=sad]

I had quite high expectations about the story since it was going really well without any problems, but the moment you introduced the party system and revealed the system everything fell off for me. It was good while it lasted.

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Interesting...🫡[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

Você está alongando demais a história que já ficou chata, você não está entrando em nada de interessante e não está criando um enredo original, está fazendo muito filler, assim como em seus outros trabalhos. Espero sinceramente que você não continue assim.

(Google traductor) It's quite entertaining. Good reading, stay on the right track.🫡[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]