if YanLong has 1 million readers, I'm one of them if YanLong has 5 readers, I'm one of them if YanLong has 1 reader, I am that reader if YanLong doesn't have readers, I'm not on earth if the world is against YanLong, I'm against the whole world

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Good novel, EXP

I don't know, I was unmotivated by the fact that I received a lot of criticism in my first novel, plus I had already written over 60 chapters so there was no way to make the changes that people had asked me to do.

Nice Story, EXP

don't give up on continuing this fic, it's very good despite the grammar mistakes, but i don't blame you i'm terrible in english too. 140 140

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Thanks for the feedback, I intend to continue writing even if the world hates this novel, this is my first time writing something, so I don't intend to give up. I am sad that people drop my novel so soon, as in the future many things will happen. Well, on the reviews of angry people in this novel, I can't do much other than give my best.

Fixed, THX <3

Hello I am the author, I am giving this review to talk a little. English is not my primary language so don't expect something perfect, I am trying to improve over time and I hope to achieve it. The first few chapters can be a little difficult to read, as I still didn't have much idea of ​​what to do, but I guarantee it will improve over time. I hope you give my novel a chance. All feedback is welcome so feel free.

I will be correcting this mistake in the future, I apologize.

Thanks for feedback. I apologize for my bad English, I will be trying to improve with time, besides I intend to develop the characters better in the future, so you don't have to worry I will do it slowly.

there is the teles and tepes faction. Tepes is OC faction.

Thanks for the feedback, I feel that really the experience is not very pleasant at first since things were not very clear, I also intend to improve the dialogs of the characters to make it more human. Thanks again.

I see that you are a man of culture.

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I didn't worry about that