Ferasight

that pretty common even in tog the author skips a lot pf floors so i got nothing much to go off for those floors

well, i mean, when i wrote this chapter, it was a kind of common practice. Even now, it sorta of common practice, but it is an old style warning

i think this was when i was in high school, something like that. i started these writing way too long ago to remember, but ya, that seems about right.

ya that, probably from when i was writing other book you can mix up name quite commonly when your writing multiple dumpster fires.

flame user that's what it roughly means. Yihwa, Yeon family. The dude that calls people chicks like chicken and try to burn them those character are Hwayeomsa

Krugra is a shinhueh made by itri and sealed in the medallion that merged with Wangnan flesh. because of his odd nature and hellfire, he often called the dark one

yes, i can see the problem. The grammar is really bad read instead of ready and missing quotations, etc. The usual cause is it caught by me on the third look over, but apparently, a lot keeps slipping through.

yes, I did that to really long walls of paragraph to get at your exact issue, however. The style I used the one you see here is something that appeared standard on at least the fanfiction side of web novels. Though my other reason was a follower with bad dyslexia that got lost constantly in the word walls, I shortened it to match styles i saw used as a standard point of. The sites fanfiction side, though i understand your points

I tried that for the first 6 arcs of zeraphim, my first ever book on the site, the results rather blatant distain and outright correction my bigger problem is i forget to describe characters adequately and to use their names when they speak instead using primarily he or she thank you, though

fun fact: their is an effect called bystander syndrome, where even in the event of a critical situation, people will stand idle and watch instead of helping.