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Thanks for reading the story and sorry that I couldn't reply before 3 years have already passed. I hope you also like the newer chapters. Also I'm hoping to do a few time skip, as this will become repetative as they are stuck in a shelter for an year. Can you let me know what you think about having a few time skips, after having so detailed description of each day? Thank you for your support it helps a lot.

I wanted to acknowledge the comments that I forgot to 3 years ago, hope you can forgive me for seemingly abandoning this. I'm doing my best as a non native speaker, and as a shy socially awkward person, I have trouble writing the recent more slice of life stuff. I hope you can give me more insights as per how I can improve. Hope you like the chapters that are to come.

Thanks for the review, I know I'm 3 years late but still wanted to acknowledge the few comments which I couldn't. I was having a lot of stress due to family and school matter hope you can enjoy the newer chapters. Also if you got some critique please let me know. Hope you can forgive me for not writing for a while. Thank you, reviews help a lot.

yes, it is true.

Can I get a translation of this review, what is said here? I can't understand.

ahh... I didn't noticed that. Well that was how bad I was at writing. Thank you for pointing that out.

it's because I'm not very great at writing and I want finish a scenario in a chapter while not writing more a thousand words. I don't like long chapters that very much.

And it would be appreciated if you can point out some more things like this, I didn't took this novel that seriously at first so their should be many more things that won't make any sense scientifically, I wouldn't want that anymore and I don't have the time needed to reread fix everything because of my study. I'll do this eventually but, a bit of help would be appreciated. I'm still not very great at writing anyways.

Thank you for pointing that out I should have looked it up before. I'm changing it to what it supposed to be. Thank you again.

I had done a little mistake, that wasn't the great war but the nuclear war.