Stoicist
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Stoicist1dBalas Dumb_organismAt least in this part of the North.
Upon hearing this, Henry gave a big smile - "Sure, I wasn't expecting anything more"- he said and immediately stretched his hands, as if he was afraid of her backing down on the agreement.- Stoicist1dBalas
Exactly!
Upon hearing this, Henry gave a big smile - "Sure, I wasn't expecting anything more"- he said and immediately stretched his hands, as if he was afraid of her backing down on the agreement. - Stoicist1dBalas Dumb_organism
Now, it’s corrected haha! I have missed on fixing this one! Thank you!
"The enemies are camping on the base of the mountain. There are at least a thousand of them." – She said, between deep breaths, a lot calmer than before – "There are five Fourth Stage Warriors on their ranks, and around twenty Third Stage and Sixty Second Stage." - Stoicist1dBalas Dumb_organismCh 151 The banquet
- Stoicist1dBalas Dumb_organismCh 151 The banquet
- Stoicist4dBalas Dumb_organism
Thank you for pointing that out! I got basically no editor and its only me doing the proofread. Some repeated paragraphs go unnoticed in the writing process. Sorry about that and thank you for the comprehension!
Viscount Jasper's hasty departure from the capital marked the beginning of a series of events that unfolded before Leier's very eyes. She witnessed the tumultuous moments as they unfolded, etching them into her memory. She stood witness as the king ascended the walls, delivering a resounding speech that rallied the army to a resounding victory against the barbarian invaders. In that moment, Leier felt the surge of pride and hope in her heart. - Stoicist4dBalas Volkov
Yooo! So, Luna has much more bargaining power than Henry. Imagine if you are the single one in a whole country capable of utilizing magic. It’s you who set the price for teaching anyone.
Upon hearing this, Henry gave a big smile - "Sure, I wasn't expecting anything more"- he said and immediately stretched his hands, as if he was afraid of her backing down on the agreement. - Stoicist6dBalas Volkov
His eyes are grey, but it turns purple when his emotions flutuates.
A few hours passed before Henry slowly opened his eyes. The once-grey hue in his irises now had a darker tint, almost shifting toward a shade of purple. It was as if a living flame flickered deep within his gaze. - Stoicist24dBalas zoka_kola
Yeah, thinking back about it, it seems like I have made a hole in the plot. I am just re-reading it with more care and it seems like I will have to pull the strings and make for it. I will try revisit some chapters and revise it. Really thank you!
On the next day, accompanied by a troop of about twenty cavalry, fifty infantry and two scribes, Henry mounted on his horse and treaded on the White Merchant Road, his first destination being the Eastern side of the kingdom. - Stoicist26dBalas zoka_kola
Oh, I didn't make it clear in this paragraph. He is using his teeth to hold and let go of the arrow.
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - Stoicist26dBalas zoka_kola
So, Henry needs to have everything under control and he can't raise generals and leaders away from his watch. He wants to control the knowledge and the people.
Leier took a brief glance at her king, noticing that he was looking ahead and returned her eyes to the road - "Your majesty have provided opportunities for the people to rise in by establishing the Commander's Training Center. The Royal Library has allowed them to gain knowledge, while the schools you established, staffed with royal teachers, have given the people a chance to change" - she replied with pride evident in her face, turning to face Henry - "Indeed, your rule have completely changed the lives of those under your rule." - Stoicist26dBalas zoka_kola
Even in a nation-state there is a necessity for hierarchy. Stahl is going towards a society based and founded on the king's image, with the army only under the king's hands.
"Answer me," Henry demanded, his voice low, betraying a hint of frustration. He understood the necessity of maintaining discipline among his troops; hierarchy and rules were paramount. - Stoicist26dBalas zoka_kolaCh 130 The end of a battle
- Stoicist26dBalas zoka_kola
As you know, almost all leaders had gone through the teaching of Henry, who imbued them with a lot of ideas and knowledge. The engineers and builders didn't go through such training, it's still on the way. It's like in the ancient roman empire, where the generals gave orders and designs and the builders had to accomplish the mission.
Ch 132 The East and West - I - Stoicist26dBalas zoka_kola
And, to dominate another kingdom, there is a must to destroy their representatives and symbols. All kingdoms and even nations nowadays are formed by symbolisms, take France for example, it's all those symbolism that generates patriotism. If you torn out those symbols, you can easily dominate them, incorporating your own symbols into that society.
"I also need to recruit new people to join my army"- Henry contemplated, his body swaying with the horse's movements - "We will soon conquer both kingdoms down south, but Luak will pose the greatest threat. Aritreia will likely be relatively easy to defeat, given that their core is already weakened with their king dead. However, Luak still is a significant enemy, but they will still come down." - Stoicist26dBalas
So, I am going with a structure that is closely resembling the Empires of Earth, where the nobility is extinguished and the power is centered around the king. It's a hierarchy that gives all decision to the army and to the king, who is the chief of the army. In a noble system, the nobles can easily revolt and take the lands, and Henry understand that.
"I also need to recruit new people to join my army"- Henry contemplated, his body swaying with the horse's movements - "We will soon conquer both kingdoms down south, but Luak will pose the greatest threat. Aritreia will likely be relatively easy to defeat, given that their core is already weakened with their king dead. However, Luak still is a significant enemy, but they will still come down." - Stoicist26dBalas zoka_kola
Yes, they are still researching, but the seal hasn't not been broken, it's only weakened to a point of allowing a single Winter Orcs to get out of there. It might take a few years for the seal to be undone.
Two weeks passed since Henry's battle with the mage, allowing him to explore the castle beyond his bed for the first time in a while. - Stoicist26dBalas zoka_kola
Heyyy, Zoka!! Thank you for the feedback, I know I am rushing things, but it will soon become clear. The attack of Aritreia and Luak was supposed to be way longer, but after some plotting, I came to the resolution that we might have a bigger hand manipulating everything. And Luna's ark is about to begin and a lot of things will be uncovered and the strings will soon be shown.
On the next day, accompanied by a troop of about twenty cavalry, fifty infantry and two scribes, Henry mounted on his horse and treaded on the White Merchant Road, his first destination being the Eastern side of the kingdom. - Stoicist29dBalas Soham_Sanyal_9718Ch 148 West General Olaro