Grafian

nothing wrong with this chapter mate. Only Adam's edgelord impression was slightly cringe :p

Hope it actually sticks, but I'm not keeping my hopes up. I honestly love everything else about this fic, the only thing is dislike is your Hermione. And I genuinely hate her character as you wrote her.

Good to know that from her perspective Harry doesn't own the islands. He literally created them from scratch, but everyone is unilaterally equal in her eyes, so everyone that manages to set foot there is just as entitled to all his hard work as him.

Hermione in your fic really seems to have issues with absolutely everything. She's so judgemental and self righteous you could legitimately rename her Karen and I wouldn't even notice.

sasuga ainz-sama

I second Asuna

Ranni best girl, fite me

do people really do that?

what is this conversation man