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Hope you're OK!
Oh no! I can't watch! (or read on specifically) 🫣
Me too. He's a complex character. A bit delusional when it comes to Penny perhaps, but if he was terrible, Zoren wouldn't have considered him his heir. I hope his jealously doesn't take over 🙏🙏
This is heartbreaking 😭💔
Not sure if you'd appreciate this comment... But maybe for future stories? I just don't want to continue perpetuating misinformation and misconceptions about the female body. There is no such thing as 'tearing the hymen' to convey the concept of virginity (virginity is a construct that was made up to control female sexuality). The hymen does exist but it's a tissue that sits around the canal, and like any other can be stretched. If the hymen was intact in this way, it'll actually require surgery to make an opening and no way will you get a tampon in there. A penis ain't going to do it, and it'll be extremely painful. The usual 'pain' that gets talked with someone's first time is usually due to being under-prepared and needing a bit more time to adjust. There's more info online if you are also interested in this
Omg! Zein's womb would also be healed!!!
Cohesive storytelling and excellent characters. One of the best original stories so far. Sometimes, it can be hard to follow, or there are too many characters that get introduced, but the author was able to control the pace of the storytelling well. 5/5
I'm interested in all those stories!! I wonder if we'll get to see more of zein's chicks as well (including senia)
Though I feel for him too 🥺
Is anyone ever this dense? 😅😑 I know I know. For the story.