I hate systems

Iam happy today i found 2 good novels that reminded me of the time i started reading webnovels for first time 6 years ago, nowadays all the novels are just trash cans filled with harem cliches or romance although it can appeal for new reader but old reader like me feel bored its good to find something good to read keep the good work up 👌👌

Badly written system i its making his past life experience completely meaninglessness and giving too much for no reason which make the story dull

Yes the novel is starting to get cringey

Ty

wow i read this before but the translation was very bad and ruined my day keep the good job dude i love the novels with teacher mc and old mc h was searching for one and thanks to god i found this

Don't mind him he is probably 40 years old lone dog that has never seen a girl in his life

Not everyone is as superficial as you dude

Wasn't his falut???, the guy was expelled because his reckless training in the public if I was him I would killed him let alone try to attack him it's like going to prison because you was near someone who tried to abbduct a child

Tong tong Shinya?? Iam dropping this the translation is trash

Man go read HP before translating professor Mc is not male its female its not college but houses

Ah idont really read the notes most of the time but the thing is not about slow development for me but about the characters themselfs I felt like they are just bunch of fools taken from a chinese cultivation novel just present for face slapping and making the Mc and his friend looks good this is my honest review I hope you can work on that a little as for your writing consistancy and world background they seems good and idea is good too keep the good work up!

I think the story is just not that interesting compared to others from the same genre the man was a king but his character is just like any average person also through the chapters he plays just a supporting role and instead of trying to improve himself and widen his view about the supposly different world to improve his acting he focuses in helping the formal female friend of the dead guy but the writing is consistent and that's an advantage at least but the characters are cringey to me especially the rich female girl that suddenly pooped out and saw something interesting in Mc without any prober reason just for the plot

Why i feel that the girl is the Mc and the Mc is just supporting role to help her shine???

I think the novel untill now is good iam waiting for what comes next. I think the novel untill now is good iam waiting for what comes next. XdI think the novel untill now is good iam waiting for what comes next. XdI think the novel untill now is good iam waiting for what comes next. Xd

Oh he is dead so simple

Noice

This isn't what I expected

Why don't he use the 8 gates of pain

I think you should make the Mc focus on the moral side of his disciples too, because he may end up with a bunch of people with young master syndrome Also I feel that the interaction between Mc and disciples is devoid of emotions you can work on that too, I hope this review helps