Eric_Herff
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Check it out bud: you've got good talent. Your skill level is very high, and for the most part, this is a good book. However, the thing keeping me from purchasing privilege is that your MC is weak. And I don't mean weak power wise. His mentality is weak, his commitment is weak, and his training progress is trash. You need to work on character building. If it improves in the future, at that point I will gladly purchase the privilege.
It's because it's a cultivation novel. All cultivation novels are like this. These cultivation tropes get really cumbersome.
Dude, you really gotta use more sense with your writing. This fight doesn't make sense.