GangikaKing

The MC in this story is weird. He eats bugs and walks around every wear barefoot. I do love the powers he has tho. Obviously alot of thought went into this which is always nice 2 see. I do think the summary could to be buffd up abit becuz this story is seriously good and I feel it doesn’t do it proper justic. But maybe that’s just me 🤷‍♂️

Great chapter, but this was his first major battle in the story, so having him win by luck after practically giving up when things didn’t go exactly as he expected doesn’t sit well with me. He could have at least tried to go down fighting, using a basic attack to try and end the fight before he was killed and lost the experience.

Great start so far. I like that your character isn’t human. Most of these game type novels all introduce the different race option but they always choose a human protagonist making the option pointless. You should be carful when using abbreviations in the middle of sentence though, they should be reserved for the stat sheet or only used occasionally to keep from repeating words. Oh and In gaming terms ATP stands for attack points not attribute points. It’s used to calculate the players hit score and their damage dealt over time.

I love that movie. Ants was so much better than A Bugs Life, but nobody seems to remember it.

Sounds about right

It wasn’t Askel that put the hit on his parents in the draft it was Dolion. And Quinn doesn’t really need to get payback on these people, since they haven’t done anything to him.

Thanks for the chapter!!! Also exp 😅

Im definitely loving it 👍👍👍

Thanks for the chapter… also exp…