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AsianAgent1mthBalas Mr_wolf_strangeWhat do you mean by "the process of souls going into heaven"? How does that relate to angels gaining holy power from souls.
Combined with his personal customization system, and through the consumption of souls for the mechanism, Roy thought that souls might be a kind of very special energy source. Demons gained magic power through devouring souls, while angels gained holy power through souls!- AsianAgent1mthBalas Mr_wolf_strange
so it can also be faith?
Combined with his personal customization system, and through the consumption of souls for the mechanism, Roy thought that souls might be a kind of very special energy source. Demons gained magic power through devouring souls, while angels gained holy power through souls! - AsianAgent1mthBerkomentar
Change "Aled" to "Alex"
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Change "eat" to "east"
After all, he was technically on break, at least for a short time. Though he wasn't being given a full interlude this time around, due to the fact that he had accidentally started the middle eat arc prematurely, Alex needed a break, and what better way to spend it, then with a harem of milfs? - AsianAgent2mthBerkomentar
Change "healthier" to "wealthier"
Margaret was sitting in her living room, drinking a glass of wine, while watching a video on home theater's massive screen. It was obvious by the quality of the room that she was quite wealthy, perhaps even healthier than Alex and his family. - AsianAgent2mthBerkomentar
Obvious mistake at the end of paragraph
"I'm afraid you are right... We might have to admit defeat on this one... After all, Mr. Smith did not intentionally step on our toes, perhaps it would be best to open negotiations..." \ - AsianAgent2mthBerkomentar
What does "à" mean? Is it a mistake?
<[Law Comprehension] Space Law: 1% à 5%> - AsianAgent3mthBerkomentar
Wasn't the skill name "Time Distortion"
[Skill: Time Reduction – Tier II] - AsianAgent3mthBerkomentar
"fee" should be "feel"
Olivia and Elena woke up the next day to find that Zane had once more prepared breakfast for them. Not specifically out of the goodness of his heart, like they misunderstood, but simply because now that he no longer required sleep to survive, or fee refreshed, Zane had a lot of downtime. And he would rather get breakfast out of the way, then waste any time having the girls prepare it. - AsianAgent3mthBerkomentar
"Olivi" should be "Olivia"
Zane immediately reached for these bottles, shocking both Elen and Olivia when he opened one up and began to drink it on the spot. Olivi, formerly being Zane's homeroom teacher, felt the need to scold him for drinking alcohol while still being under age. Forgetting that such rules no longer applied to any of them. - AsianAgent3mthBerkomentar
"when she saw this." should be "when he saw this."
Zane's hands trembled when she saw this. Luckily for him, he had already stashed his knife away or he would have accidentally dropped it on the spot. His voice cracked slightly, almost as if he was having a hard time speaking the words that needed to be said. - AsianAgent3mthBerkomentar
"Siad" should be "Said"
Siad Chae-Yeong as she breastfed her infant daughter alongside the other mature beauties who had given birth to Alex's children. Su-Jin immediately commented on this, assuring her mother that their lover would be perfectly okay. - AsianAgent3mthBerkomentar
"expected her two" should be "expected her too"
Unfortunately for her, Alex's skill with cunnilingus was maxed out, and when combined with his many skills that enhanced his sexual abilities, the woman came quicker than either of them had expected her two. - AsianAgent3mthBerkomentar
Suspended for 2 days or weeks?
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I believe "Surrounding" should be "Surrendering"
"Either you lay down your arms and join the ranks of the Zetas, surrounding your surviving territory and assets. Or we will hunt you to the ends of the earth." - AsianAgent4mthBerkomentar
"Senor" should be "Senior"
"Master, I think that's Senor Song…" Fei Yuyan whispered to Elder Shan, who immediately turned to look at her with wide eyes. - AsianAgent4mthBerkomentar
Wasn't the sect elder or examiner for the second test a woman?
'Which numbskull gave a fifth level Spirit Warrior the examination token? Whoever it was, he needs a damn beating! And I will be the first to volunteer for that!' The Sect Elder cursed inwardly as he counted the points Yuan had obtained. - AsianAgent4mthBerkomentar
Change "her" to "him"
But as Rhys was about to step in the truck on the way home, Ayesha suddenly grabbed her from behind; once again not caring that the other soldiers were looking at them. - AsianAgent4mthBerkomentar
"differe" -> "different"
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Wrong name. Change "Olivia" with "Oliver" or "Mr. Watson"
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