I don't like to complain but what's going on nunuxd said that they were going to be working on this story regularly again yet its been 2 weeks with no update we need our chapters ?

Is it just me or did we only get one chapter today ? I have been looking forward to seeing what happens with the prizes since they got 3 wrong

Is it just me or is Harrys AI trying to get rid of vernon the things he suggjests seam innocent enough yet always seem to get vernon in trouble ?

The other kid seems like hes the only person who has been on the MCs side and his friend and you NEVER leave a friend behind in that kind of place

Sadly he's dumber then the rock sun wukong jumped out of

Ok that part was messed up I don't mind him killing people who try to kill him first but doing that to the city was messed up hopefully since he is now some kind of sun god he can bring them back

It only mentioned she was it didn't show it for instance does Jarvis know that another AI is messing with him or does he just think its another one of the countless people who try to hack Tony stark all the time already

I wonder what kind of nobility his fathers family is no matter how hard his mother looked she couldnt find a single thing about them so they must have some kind of power to hide that deeply

Then those council men need to be ready to cough up hundreds of millions to buy the patent from you themselves

He's kind of stupid isn't he ?

Sorry the batteries are going on my keyboard since he's a man shouldn't it be a handsome smile since only women have beautiful smiles ?

Sadly i dont see a romance tag for this story but it has great promise so far other then that.

there were 4 mistakes just in the summary does it happen alot in the story or does it get better ?

I don't know about anyone else but I want to see cortana and Jarvis meet maybe even have Jarvis shock Tony by telling him about her

Hes man shouldn't that be a handsome simile ?

He needs to use that money to go to a buffet restaurant so he can find out how many points he can get from different foods

He's gonna end up looking like an Asian Dwayne Johnson

Am I missing something I though they were going to be writing chapters again ?

From gorgeous to grotesque sadly she also has a habit of going nuts and eating people

Who wants to be a marine you have those fish bowl wearing weirdos who can command you to murder women and children or worse so that they can watch someone die and you either do it or die yourself pirates literally do more to help people then they do