oh ohhhhh OH SHIT

Ohhhh brownies about to hit the fan like it’s nobody business

While you were contemplating escaping your cell I studied the blade

Good chapter

Didn’t remember I tried to start a fanfic on here I might consider trying again if people are still finding it

Basically one of the better bl stories out there (not that there are many still being published) but I really enjoy this and like the fact that bl3 and 1 is acknowledged by the author when most of the time it’s just bl2 or something completely out of canon I have great enthusiasm for the author’s continuing work.

Very good take my three power stones

I’ve only seen one other fanfic with an Australian main character (even if said Australian was from mc’s previous life) so I’m very excited

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I meant the other spartans but I should have written that comment a bit clearer

I wonder if he will tell them he was awake for most of the augmentation

I understand why he wants 1 Star it keeps most of the idiots at bay When most people see 1 start they don’t even care what the story is about or how it looks they move on but to those that actually enjoy proper entertainment through reading will look past the ratings

Hello again lightning I ask if lonesome road will return but I know it won’t but at least change the story to completed if your done

Good stuff I’l keep tabs on your work and check in on this story once a day I hope you find the inspiration to keep witing

He would probably be alive for around 30 seconds before going unconscious

Good work keep it up 👍 Please

If the skills can’t be replicated that means NOBODY can use magic like him anymore no matter where he goes unless they had said skills beforehand so this skill is fairly busted

I love this story please continue to wr ite