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Leloch_vi_britania

Leloch_vi_britania

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2019-12-20 BergabungGlobal
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  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania3 years ago
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  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania3 years ago
    Balas Victor_Weismann

    ... this is @#nt-ai, Righ? right? Gime a code!

  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania3 years ago
    Balas Victor_Weismann

    All hail Britannia!!

  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania3 years ago
    Diterbitkan

    I was surprised when I saw this novel, it is very well written, and you can see the effort the author is putting to make it well done. Don't expect anything too complex from this novel, it is simple and straightforward, the plot is well established and the characters are very good, (Kaguya is my favorite cough) Writing 5 stars. World was not developed enough for me to speak. Characters definitely 5 stars. updates? It's very good, the author updates every day with more than 2k words, as a reader I wanted more... but I know how difficult it is to do a good job like this without losing quality. Editor. this guy is very good, he is helping the author a lot. IsUnavailable, he's a good editor, the author sure found a gem. Overall, it's a good novel for you to read with a smile on your face all the time, Violet the wife who's been introduced so far is very cute, and everyone who likes Yandere can like her too. (Isn't she psycho like Yuno, is she more like Albedo than overlord?) This is a good novel that I will definitely follow, the author is also one of my favorites, I have always followed his work, and he is a good person. I think that's it for now, Seeya.

  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania4 years ago
    Diterbitkan

    Okay, the author deleted my review, I understand that I exaggerated but here is another one. Do not read this novel if you do not like themes like groups, ganband, or dark stories like that. The author managed to break the image that I had of Nacisa, if you are curious about what I am talking about, just read chapter 26.

  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania4 years ago
    Balas Adrianix1234

    This will not happen, the author said that she would have a second MC ..

  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania4 years ago
    Balas KasiCair

    1523/5000 If you were to do something like this, you shouldn't have changed anything. Just let her be the arrogant noble that we all know from books. I understand that you wanted to change something, after all, it is a Fanfic, but that is just disgusting, if it were just her husband it would be acceptable, and we would have a reason to hate Malfoy's father. But being raped by half the wizarding world? ... That's just disgusting ... I know she wasn’t raped by half the wizarding world, I just put it like that so I don’t list everything you’ve put as her background story. Another thing that was disgusting, is that she served Voldemort with her broken Sister. She was clearly raped along with her sister by Voldemort .... and she said it was amazing ... This is disgusting friend ... I don't know how you can write this and continue, I know you wanted to give Nacisa a tragic past, but this is just forcing the plot. I know you wanted to change, I know this is a fanfic, but .... Sigh. I don't know, just do what you want, I give up. This fanfic was incredible until this chapter, I honestly missed the hype of reading your fanfic. It was like I expected a very tasty pizza, but someone had thrown shit on it, that's just disappointing. Probably, you will lose many readers because of this, after all, there are few people who like this type of story, but probably, you don't mind, right? ......... You managed to destroy the image of Nacisa that I had from the books of J.K. Rollings

  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania4 years ago
    Berkomentar

    Don't delete my review !! You are a patient and need to be treated !! Don't delete my review !! You are a patient and need to be treated !!

  • Leloch_vi_britania
    Leloch_vi_britania4 years ago
    Balas Victor_Weismann

    I agree.