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Try to ignore it. If you delete the comments they'll think that they are right and then comment something more aggresive. And if you think that those comments are to much, then take a break, enjoy the great outdoors ir something along those lines. Anyway hope seeing more of your work in the future:)
like why he didn't get accepted into the adventure guild, and out of nowhere a good girl appears, like who stops at the side of the road to give some money to a begger and from where the monsters came out to attack his sister and those thieves
Your writing is good, you deliver well, but please explane the things you are writing about. I understand that having mystery is good and all, but cant you wait until the later chapters.
good start, keep it up. But it is a little confusing at the start