yeah, right, lol.

I'd first like to see an evidence that you've actually sat down and read the whole thing. Then I might consider. Otherwise it's most likely a half-hearted attempt at padding up your site's book count for free, which I deem quite disrespectful to authors.

The pacing is extremely fast I fear you might be shedding too much for the sake of pushing the plot. On the other hand tho, I guess that would appeal to today's readers. Downside is that this feels a bit like a barren log of character actions and dialogues, so I wish to see a bit more of meat added.

We all went through that awkward self-important, fantasy-ridden teen years, thinking "urgh, everyone is so stupid", "I'm so secretly special" and the first few chapters make us wonder if the MC is going through THAT phase. Turns out she is indeed special LOL. "It was nine. Nothing unthinkable was happening." I've read many stories on this site but this opening sentence triumphs over all. Pacing is good and chapters are at lengths digestible to today's readers. Super Squad is a name designed to be a jab at the cringy daydreamings we all had at least once, but the author takes it up to eleven which pushs the whole thing into the cool territory. You secretly want your teen fantasy come to life, this story delivers.

This chapter tells a lot about the Best family and its members, especially the MC, but not in a spoon-fed way. That's a promising display of good writing.

I had skipped the synopsis and dived right in. At first I thought it was going to be a "Sailor Moon"-esque stuff so the twist was rather refreshing. There are more than enough spots where, what I suspect to be auto-correct ( or may be auto-fill) messes it up so I suggest thorough proofreading. IIRC there's a movie coming out this year about a NPC in a MMO game becoming self-aware. You might wanna check that out and pick up one or two interesting ideas and elements to adopt into your story.

Slow and beautifully meticulous, with a hint of Easton Ellis and Fitzgerald but in a contemporary (and safe for work) 50 shades way. What impresses me the most is that the characters talk in ways that match their portrayed personalities, but at the same time the 'buddies' ooze a bit of group mentality shared in their small circle. It makes them feel so real. Such detail is an absolute gem, rarely seen in webnovel platforms. I'm gonna powerstone this!

I love this. It's like a Disney children's book that keeps going and going smooth like silk. The way things are narrated in a fairy-tale style more than makes it up for the grammar. I had initially planned to read maybe five or six chapters before writing a review, but couldn't stop. Big Kudos!

how long does it take for physicians from other kingdoms to arrive?

TBH this is very confusing. It takes immense concentration and note-taking to make sense of what's going on, who's doing what. But on the other hand that aspect of this piece is quite charming. Cute, so to say. It's chaotic narrative continued to catch me off-guard and I couldn't help appreciate the randomness. I look forward to the promised edit coming later, but for now this has been surprisingly enjoyable albeit the writing quality.

This reads very much like a screenplay. I'd like to see author expands and add more than actions and dialogues. Plot is intriguing and characters are interesting enough. The battle scene is exciting. Epic, I dare say. The story's got a huge potential. So, a bit more muscle on the bone, and this would rake in stars and readers.

Shamelessly giving myself a 5-star review lol heck why not? I'm having 5 stars worth of fun writing this story. So this may as well be my review on the writing activity itself, not the resulting work. Would give myself a full 5.0 score, but lately I've been too busy with a RL project :( Please note that, for the purpose of easy reading (and writing), forms of address intentionally follows the English system although I make it quite obvious that the story is set in a fantasy version of Medieval France. I'm very pleased with the two main characters and hope readers find Anna and Rene interesting and endearing. Please do feel free to comment, review, powerstone, etc. Thank you,

Cinderella Twilight! This story has a great potential albeit in need of a bit of grammar work. The opening with the burning mansion is impactful enough to encourage readers to keep going. I'd like to have some more substance added to scenes, tho. At least for up to where I've read, it's all dialogues and actions. A screenplay would be fine with that, but a novel needs a bit muscle on the bones. Anyway, I like how it's going so far. Please keep up the good work!

For me at least, transmigration to a Chinese-themed isekai is something completely new. Or maybe I've read/seen too many run-of-the-mill anime and manga. In that regards this piece is a refreshing experience. Progression is top-level smooth, actions detailed and thorough. Meticulous so to say. Kudos for thoughtful writing and planning. When a new element is introduced, it's entrance is always carefully, appropriately, and logically prepared beforehand. Very nice. Having said all that, when is the BL stuff coming?

Author's thought every chapter asking readers to buy the kindle book and visit their website is seriously off-putting and breaks the immersion. Other than that, the plot is decent and characters intriguing albeit many of them appear out of blue. That, however, could actually work very well in comic format where slapping on a nameplate underneath a new character's face gets the job done in a single panel. The nations have a bit of Caldari and Amarr (of EVE Online) feel to them, for which I was delighted.

I remember this face. This is actually the 2nd time you are reviewing this story LOL, because I'm reuploading to enter this year's spirity. Thank you so much. I will get on with your novel ASAP!

Roar.....swoosh.....boom! Interesting! The synopsis is very attractive and the plot is well written too! Great story though. Keep writing and try to update regularly. I cheer you!

I was pumped up with the sci-fi prologue. Hope the elements return to the main plot somehow, but even if they didn't this story still is an excellent piece of writing with rich background. You can't ask for a fuller package than this. In fact, I am a bit overwhelmed by the fast pacing of entities being introduced to the story, it's become a bit challenging to track who's who and what's what. The latest chapters are obviously still the very beginning of a long journey, yet I can already tell this is going to go the distance. I am excited to see what's to come

This is an impressive piece. It's obvious the author has put in a lot of thoughts and pre-planning. I'm a big fan of meticulous writing, and this definitely is one. For example, the first chapter manages to deliver a whole lot of information regarding the novel's fantasy world with just a few hundred words, but not in a "memorize this before you read on" way. That's a clear sign of the author's literary skill. Execution-wise I sense a bit of language barrier issue as evidenced by repeat use of expressions and words, but it's not too detrimental. I expect this will surely be ironed out as the author settles down on a style and then experiments with varying expressions and words. Two suggestions for the author; I think either sigil, glyph, or even rune would work better than the word formation. Also it would be a bit more noob-friendly if the you gave brief visual descriptions of the demons and beasts mentioned. But overall this story is fantastic. Big kudos!

This chapter is beautifully written, and the world and its magic are very efficiently established. There's a tiny consistency issue : The man's intense gaze and concentration don't go quite well with "peaceful face". Also, snow indicates we are in winter but then we have flowers being tossed.