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In comparison to some Twilight SI that are on this app, he isn't, and Twilight vampires are pretty powerful. So while impossible to kill, he still can be overpowered, especially if he is alone again two or more twilight vampires.
I love the story and can't wait for the next chapter. I do have a question. How does he turn others? Does it work like TVD? Where the person he wants to turn needs to drink his blood and then die. Or is it like traditional vamps where if he doesn't drain the person they will turn? I hope that it is like TVD because the other option seems like a hassle to deal with, but it is your story your choice. I am just curious how it works.
I like it. All three wishes seem reasonable for the world he is going to. Even with this, there aren't any serious threats to him. Also, fics that go with wishes and make MC super op compared to the world they are in usually die fast or are boring. Am looking forward to how this turns out. But by wishes alone, it looks like it will be a fun read. Please don't drop it 🙏.
I have to disagree. While I like true immortality, having a way out of it is a must. Else what would he do when the sun dies if humans don't discover a way to traverse space?
First I love the story, and Barney being a Vampire is an awesome idea. I can't wait for the next update. I am also excited to see what other supernatural beings are in this world. I hope you don't drop this story since it seems like it will be awesome. One more thing. Now don't take this as me telling you what to do with your story. But I really hope you don't follow the lead of all others who basically turn their MC into a god who is too op to reasonably interact with other characters from the world. Anyway, thanks for the fun read. 😁
I found another picture that I liked for goblins while searching for one for house elves.
That isn't a mistake. He is a keeper hopeful ('a person likely or hoping to succeed.').
I had it planned out to add a brother later in the story.
I didn't plan for this to be a harem story, but I did plan it for both Lily and Klaus to bring girls to feed on and have fun with from time to time. As for this mention of a harem, it isn't important for the story that much. They are really old so how they see relationships is different from someone who doesn't have that much time.
No. Harry was already born before Lily was taken to the past. This fic is on something of a break. I have been planning to go through it and edit it. But I am concentrating on Keeper of Mana when I have time.
Thanks 😊, I fixed it.