MatiasR

really annoyed with how author/tl? changes the names constantly. the girl is supposed to be Stella.

she?

read 6 chapters, poor grammar and wrong names. puts me off this fanfic. story starts good and if you dont mind the mistakes it would be fine. not for me though.

wasn´t fist class the highest?

yoichi or hiroshi?

+1

would enjoy a good story from precanon. maybe some dark continent stuff. or mix it up. always interesting how people write about the dark continent.

+

no one expects the Inquisition but the right word here is acquisition.

it is starting to get pretty annoying when the author keeps mixing pronouns. he him his himself are for males and she her hers herself are for females. please keep in mind. thank you.