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It was a good ending but I didn't see anything about his younger sister how she ended up you mentioned Alex's side but not his own.
then once they reach maturity they then kick them out on the street like the street rats that are.
Did this scene happen like this because he has good luck now after the second gacha. or are you not following the luck plot that you had before. If you are still following the luck plot line I like how you did it.
I love the names of the town and island.
How do they not know that he is at Hogwarts? Every student knows he is there. I am sure they told their parents in a letter, especially the slytherins that want to build connections. Do they block the news in all the letters? The ministry knows about him. So his parents should know as well. They are only under surveillance not containment.
"hatchling" I think is better for a Ravenclaw myself.
Shino was a finalist. He didn't fide anyone because kankuro forfeited his match.
Everything but stupidity is curable.
Said the man that enslaved the goblin race to the orc race.
I love the way you are showing that the MC isn't perfect. It is quite funny to me. It stands out from other stories.
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This chapter was stupid to me. I understand you wanting to build the relationship with them, but you don't need to lower the women's IQ to do that. Where did those thin clothes come from. I can look past that, they are in a town now maybe from shopping. We know that they weren't down the mountain because they only have what the shop gave them for survival. She knew what environment she was go to. She just survived almost freezing to death a few day before. You are really sensitive to the cold for a long time after that. So what I am trying to say is that even if she had those clothes with her there is no way she would were them while walking threw town to go eat. Yes in a warm house or hotel or wherever they are staying she could were them. But she would definitely but on warmer clothes if she went out. So please don't put stupid this in the story. I like your story so far. I am commenting to maybe help with he quality of the story improve.
is a system an unorthodox means?
I like these transmigration novels and think about what I would do if it happens to me. I know could remember the main plot if I could keep my memories but I know I would forget the names of the bijuu by the time I would be able to meet one. I would be like I know you guys have name but I have forgot them and now I don't have internet to look them up before talking to them.
It said that he traveled back in time 3 months before doomsday. It just now said how long he survived before reincarnating.
This is a world that the Hokage will let the entire village show hatred to a little kid for something that is out his control. They didn't let him know who his parents were until he is old enough to portect him from his parents enimes. All this while he was a Hokage's son. This show a that they don't give two shots about anyone.
Thank you for this note. Without this note I would be a little upset by that fact. Now Knowing that he is a trainee, it makes the story a little more believable.
Congratulations you just died again.