I enjoy Writing whenever, I can. Rather it be my own or simply translating others for fun.
2019-07-16 BergabungUnited States
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The story appears well-fed, but the background lacks realism and seems far-fetched. Despite this, it is not a bad story. However, it could benefit from more factual and detailed descriptions to better ground the reader in the world of the story.