ThePizzaGuy1

The story is probably ending. But I don't like the idea of separation. Bcs the bracelet.. It couldn't be on with ryder. So why?

Just two sick immortal in the end.. Come on.. All this for that!?

Mate, I was talking about the girls at least we had in our previous novel. .I'm not sure about other worlds, but the home world should include them and about other worlds I think. Marvel had too. Much girls and the rest was fine.

Well we can think the author don't want it.. You know he was already against the idea . But anyway we can wait and see what happens but I literally think if this goes the usual her being punished than nothing to say more.

Yo.. Fan.. Your loyal supporter here. To be fair I don't care much about how nik develop feelings or things.. I already told that previous world was but too fast. And this world seems just fine. But I do wish that you don't leave the original girls out of it and I would rather like some more romance rather than boredom.. DEPENDS on you as you always do good. Hope you will not change it this time around.

A good novel with a bad ending maybe. How sad it will be . All this for love u can give but you don't want to.. Alas..

To be truth ,the author never heard what we said. From the first to last he just made her bad.. Nothing else.. Now he is making her more bad..

The story is seems much more better this time.. I just hope u don't leave the girls out

To.. Fan.. It's pizza.. I'm not sure about your intentions with the rewrite. But pls don't leave the original girls out of the way.. If you want to reduce some girls from marvel saga that's fine.. But these one, not really. Help out this poor guy here😢

It's fine mate. U write very well.. I just like nik a lot. So after a long time it's take bit of time for me to adjust. .keep it going.. 😊