Justin_Steiner
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Cocodoll expressed his voice switching very quickly from feminine to masculine as he spoke with clear hatred for Princess Renner. Due to interference from Renner, the king got the bright idea to decreased the amount of debt a person can get before they can be considered for slavery and out lawed the idea of using children as collateral for the debt, before one can be a slave they are given the opportunity to pay around 50 percent of the debt if they want to stay free, however the king lowered that to 25 percent and added an extra six months for the indebted to collect the funds, these are things that struck a blow to Cocodoll's steady cashflow, not to mention child slaves were the most profitable.- Justin_Steiner30dBalas LongSongGolden
This story definitely has some consistency issues.
"Quick..." Madara sighed, seeing that there were no more of them alive and went to the nest, where he spat out more fire, destroying it. He took a spare sword and started cutting the necks of the burned creatures, but he didn't return immediately to the village, since his job was very quick and probably they would complain, already knowing this world, saying that his work was too easy and he shouldn't be paid the full amount. - Justin_Steiner1mthBerkomentar
ewww
"Because I don't like them." - Justin_Steiner2mthBerkomentar
Isn't this a translation? Even further, it's fanfiction. That makes it two steps removed from you even having any credit to it. If your motivation to translate is money and not spreading a story you enjoy, I suggest looking for something else to do.
I know many of you enjoy this novel, and I love it too. However, continuing a project that doesn't generate income is unsustainable. Currently, there's only one Patreon supporter, which isn't enough to make this viable for me. I hope you can support this novel. Have a nice day. - Justin_Steiner3mthBerkomentar
This really is going to be an annoyance we constantly have to listen to throughout the entire story, isn't it?
However, swordsmanship was merely a hobby, while magic was Rozen's true pursuit. Besides, as mentioned before, even though it was a bit troublesome, Rozen could still use sword techniques with his current body. - Justin_Steiner3mthBerkomentar
Is this going to be a constant thing? Because it's already gotten old.
"Stop nagging! Don't treat me like some barbarian! I... I rely on my intellect for a living!" - Justin_Steiner6mthBerkomentarCh 116 The fierce Shizuka-sensei, and the surprised romcom protagonist
- Justin_Steiner7mthBalas EasymodeX
I think the point is, it isn't her own requirement. She just basically loves unconditionally. Maybe? I don't know.
Except for Lala, the girls were actually quite troublesome. - Justin_Steiner7mthBerkomentarCh 19 [19] Girl Consequences
- Justin_Steiner8mthBerkomentar
cringe
"Today, let me be your knight, Utaha." - Justin_Steiner8mthBalas FortuneEternal
Of course you're going to get backlash for writing an insert fic then still focusing on the original MC. From what I understand, even when the POV switches, you still have Rudeus as an important part of the story, right? That's a recipe for disaster, especially considering what most people read inserts for and the demographic of this site.
- Justin_Steiner8mthBerkomentar
Yea, that's it for me. Good luck with the story. I can point out a lot of things I'd consider negative, like your character being overall unlikable, or your incessant need to repeat yourself over and over again, but overall this has just been annoying to read.
Ch 10 The Emergence of the Entropy Touch - Justin_Steiner9mthBerkomentar
Lightning. Thunder is the sound.
The thunder kept hitting him for a few minutes before vanishing. - Justin_Steiner10mthBerkomentar
That's some early 2000's humor right there.
Rob: "If it was any other subject maybe there would be a better chance I could take you to some kingdom, but not even in hell do they want someone with such bad tastes and weird fetishes." - Justin_Steiner10mthBerkomentar
I mean this girl was what, 16? I'd be more likely to pity her 'cause a girl like that doesn't usually have a good home life.
Paragraf ini telah dihapus. - Justin_Steiner10mthBerkomentarCh 2 Chapter 2: Return from the Death
- Justin_Steiner10mthBerkomentar
I wish we could just stop giving an actual measurement. Leave it to the viewer and these arguments go away. "Wow, it's big!"There you go.
'Good thing I stopped it with magic before that happened, no woman would come near me after seeing anything bigger than this,' Adam still thought, that maybe even his current size is a little big for normal women. - Justin_Steiner11mthBerkomentar
This is a crime
After a while, a blindfolded and bound girl was brought by Homura to Sagiri's door...