Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed the chapters so far!! I am working on sprucing up the second part of The Fall of Grace, so I hope you will check it out once I post it!
This is definitely an interesting read, and I am curious to find out how the story will continue to develop! The writing starts off a little confusing, but I'm confident it will only get better and better!
The story is good and the first chapter gives a good sense of the story's potential to be truly great! The writing quality struggles a little between past and present tense, but if you can get past that, the story is a gripping read.
Go give this story a read! The fantasy setting does not distract from the all too real pain of those suffering from unrequited love. I'm excited to see how the story will further develop, and you should be too!