Thanks for the review! There’s a couple groups of chaps that I was just writing to meet word goals, I’m planning on a rework while continuing the story. As far as power systems nd allat, everything is chakra or just energy in general. Arguably it doesn’t feel right writing chars for example gray saying Ice Jutsu” when it’s ice make.. nd the inserts are bound to be random however I agree I should have done more effort in the writing, I’ve skilled over multiple scenes and key points without showing correlation in the chapters to come

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First pick as to which AOT character(s) are featured in this?

Damn so you can do this twice? Give this a try! If you can last I promise fulfilling fights and unique jutsus, picked up and dropped a few times so there may be a few hiccups although I’m actively editing what matters.. if you didn’t read enough I’m deleting reviews simple lol 80 chaps out give the second 30 a try

Well well well… I’m shamelessly going to shamelessly give myself 5 in all points! This is going to be a quick little story I do, I’d like to work on various fanfics just to put out some of my craziest what ifs.. if only I could write out every thought of mine into fanfics, anyways.. this story is about a teen who was bullied his whole life and has been keeping his shifter powers away. Will he save the world or will he bring forth destruction? I chose ultimate salvation of peace. This is a story in which the Mc only wants peace and at what costs will he sacrifice to gain his peace?

You use them once you reach locked chapters

He took too many he doesn’t even remember how to take them

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Bet I'm uploading The edited chaps for 1-24 this week

He doesn’t necessarily know at this point in time but he knows that everyone he’s was hiding info he just didn’t know whether they didn’t know anything or if it was a genjutsu keeping them from speaking

Rewriting chaps 1-24 just for this reason, I believe things could’ve went different

He’s able to use any element he learns or trains

Tales for future chaps ion wanna spoil it for you, it’s a different timeline with some similarities but more differences

What’s that? And I believe he’s already boundless his potential is unlimited

He has a conflicting personality, the torture and trauma he’s been through made him nonchalant towards anyone that isn’t his loved ones

Yessir, welcome back

Great question, I have no clue of his serious relationship

Fam imagine you're playing a game and you create a character… that's the same exact way I make my mcs .. This man exists and u talking bout it doesn't make sense

Shamelessssssss review by the one and only! I have a couple things I want to point out now. -no harem -alternate universe/timeline -op chars/mc although the skill gap in each rank is greatly higher potential, let’s say a genin before is equal to mid-high chunin or low jonin level -Slower buildup until about chapter 50, I plan on writing a lengthy novel so I decided the foreshadowing was worth going into -be my best/worst critic, it makes me a better author ! -the system progression is sloppily planned but once I rewrite the first arc everything will make sense in the long run