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They know he is training , i think in the last chapter i said that he was slacking off because his mother wasn't there and he only trains in his lessons , after that he does nothing , that's why he could go steal a panty in his sister room as she was still training while he was doing nothing. As for if they're raising a child or a soldier , i would say that they see him as a soldier first without spoiling much. It's another world logic , where fighting and death is common . You should also never forget that my writing may just be bad 👀. I will do the following chapters in a package , so that the readers will have the complete developpement and there won't be frustation like there is on this one . If it's still bad after that , the problem is probably me . Anyway thanks for the feedback !
after 3 years
To be honest , i was not too sure about those scenes and since they were not liked , i though about another way to use those characters and this way pleased me more which made me delete the 3 chapters. i don't know if you wanted me to keep those chapters, if you did , i hope you're not too dissapointed. Thanks for the "you' aren't a bad writer" , i really appreciate it !
Thanks for the feedback ! since all the reviews i got about this were negatives , i decided that i will take those chapters out of the story and have a different course of action for those characters.
right now no, having the mc watch is a bit boring , even when writing it i was bored . the chapter 11 is from the daughter Perspective but i will post an author though asking for people opinion about such chapters and depending of the results , it might never happen again or only one or two about the aftermath with the angels.
i will probably ask for opinions at the end of chapter 11 so just skip through it if you still want to read this story .