Jadeite_Green
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2019-01-09 BergabungPhilippines
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Tulisan
3.9h
membaca
357
Membaca buku-buku
Lencana
6Momen
42
Jadeite_Green9mthBerkomentar[Sacred Doctor's College, Philippines]- Jadeite_Green9mthBalas UelUelPeta is surely taking her sweet time tonight. I really have an urge to sleep, so I gently shut my eyes, getting ready to slip into a much-needed slumber.
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Hello, Author. From what I've read in chapters 1 through 3, there appear to be some errors, such as incorrect use of punctuation, and starting in chapter 4, you only focus on the character's dialogue. In order to increase the readers' interest in your story, add more description of the setting as well as details about the characters' actions and thoughts. That's all, continue the wonderful job.
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I think it is better if you do not use capital letters in this line.
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- Jadeite_Green9mthBalas Alejandro_Del_ReyCh 2 New Life
- Jadeite_Green9mthBerkomentar"Are you kidding me, Seth, why do you ask me such a strange question in the middle of those nuisances?"
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- Jadeite_Green9mthBerkomentarAbigail looked confused at first and pouted, looking extremely depressed as traces of sadness appeared on her face. "You… You didn't even let me finish. I was so close to the ending!"
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I'm enjoying your story so far. keep up the food work❤❤❤
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