yea, I think I'll fix that part

thank you for bringing this to my notice.

you can join my discord server, the link is on the synopsis

yes

I'm sorry, I didn't mean to. if it's any consolation, I'm a black dude too

I'm sorry

Raven's story has a depth that is crucial, her story is going to unfold but I'm trying to build the pressure... it will come

corrected

I've corrected it 😭

eh? no no no no, this is quite different... I honestly wasn't doing that, if you read it you'll see the difference.

I'm still working in changing that, in its entirety, it's not clicking well. lol, so yes expect some changes in the drifters rank

It's alike in a way, but also different, I adopted the two classes method of shadow slave to give monsters a wide range of versatility and room for growth while also maintaining the significance of each rank.

no, no, he wasn't, I don't remember mentioning that he was. Even though he had a girlfriend he was a total noob at it, a core nerd

she smiles a lot contrary to what I thought 😭

Thank you very much ❤️

Yes it was ;]

Thank you for the review, I will work on re-editing those chapters to give new readers a smoother experience, although I don't mind if you can join the discord server and specifically point out the things you found disturbing

Thank you very much for the review but this was mean, haha

I could swear I didn't shift POVs in the beginning, lol, maybe I'm not that experienced yet. I'm sincerely sorry you were not gripped by the story and found it to be irritating but I also think it's a matter of preference, I wish I could do more to make you more interested though

I'll start first by explaining my choice of classification, while it was inspired by SS, I wanted to create a classification system that gave an enormous room for growth but still kept the monster within a certain power level as compared to the other rank, but most importantly introducing an element of variability. The system also is a boring system, its the kind of system that goes straight to the point nothing more nothing less, compared to other system you read in several novels, I'd say this one is more of a programmed thing...very very boring. As for the repetition, I think that's a fault on my part, I'm not that great of a writer but I take criticism seriously and really want to become better. Also, I'm sorry if I sounded rude, I asked that question because I was actually curious. I didn't know there was a reply already