The story was alright from 1st to 30th chapters but towards 50th I lost interest. It was mostly repeated topic about the characters and side characters perspective. It was like I was listening to my Mother’s lecture whenever I’m in trouble, and around the 40th chapter the words got complex that it was hardly readable. The book does have potential but it has to many fillers that is unnecessary which ruined the story.
RighteousFilth
Disukai oleh 1 orang
SUKARighteousFilth:Thank you for the review, I will work on re-editing those chapters to give new readers a smoother experience, although I don't mind if you can join the discord server and specifically point out the things you found disturbing