Hehe Should've stayed and watched them MC..

I hope the MC will eventually warm up and show more emotions. Its so cold, my fingers are getting frostbite typing this...! Anyway, great chapter, thanks.

I think you're doing great! I am thoroughly enjoying this OC. Its easy to get into and a relaxing read. Keep it up, Author! \o\ /o/ \o/

This story heals me with its cuteness. It's an easy and relaxing read. I'm looking forward to moaaar, Author. \o/ Dudududududududuududdududu

Umu Umu. My heart is happy. Thanks for the chapter, Author.

Lovin' it! Keep it up Author. \o/

Hey there! Thanks for pointing it out. I had reread some of the chapters and noticed the inconsistencies in the system's personality, so I've altered it a bit and I've changed the name to fit it. I will keep it female. My reasoning being the system is a persona from Audrey Hall. It inherently makes the system female, it makes more sense to me that way. Anyway, thanks for commenting. o/

This in reference to your other comment that was deleted. Hello again o/ It is true that I do not plan when I write each chapter. Since on any day that I feel like writing I just use what pops up in my head and finish it that same day with some light editing(spelling mistakes, odd wording, etc.). Just letting you know that's how its going to be for the foreseeable future. This might change later if I ever feel like getting serious serious with this. Thanks for the critique nonetheless :}

Hello again o/ It is true that I do not plan when I write each chapter. Since on any day that I feel like writing I just use what pops up in my head and finish it that same day with some light editing(spelling mistakes, odd wording, etc.). Just letting you know that's how its going to be for the foreseeable future. This might change later if I ever feel like getting serious serious with this. Thanks for the critique nonetheless :}

Thanks for the post. =3= I've done some edits after reading your post. I believe I addressed some of the things you had pointed out. Though, like I said in the summary I'll be making changes and additions so beware. I'm making it a shared universe, as it'll make it easier for me to have fun without worrying too much about the fine details, not that I wont, just some exceptions along the way. Also don't worry about the power structure, I had intended from the beginning to keep it as LotM as possible but with some additions that he gets from other worlds. His main source of power will be LotM. Now, addressing the cringe-ness. Unfortunately, I suffer from it and I don't notice sometimes. If you're talking about the MC or system from before chapter 5 then I will deal with that later. Though, like I said I sometimes don't notice it and it would need to be pointed out to me. '+.+ Lastly, your point about the granny gave me some ideas after playing around with her in my head for a while, so thanks.

I can see what you mean. I meant it to be more of a storage thing. I'll revise. Thanks for pointing it out.

The Darkness pathway can affect the mind at later sequences but compared to Visionary its like parlor tricks.

You're right. I can see the possible confusion. I'll revise it.

You're right..I reread it and I kinda did make him somewhat weaker than I intended..Ill do some revising Thanks for pointing it out.

It's on the Lord of the mysteries wiki, check it out.

*wink* *wink*

Thank you~!

I think so too!! I have many ideas but its kinda hard putting it into words, as this is my first time. BUT I'LL DO IT FOR THE FOOL!!! *whispers* Even though he died in the first chapter....

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