DripSoup

This is genuinely one of the best web novels I have ever read, and I have been reading this medium for over a decade. I ran out of stories that interested me on Royalroad and came over here to give it a try and wow! It's been a delight to see the Author grow as a writer over the past 1000+ chapters. Thank you GT!

The small POV switch of what the girl is thinking really pulls you out of the story. We don't need to know what she is thinking right at that moment. Leave a little mystery. If you are going to do a POV switch then do it fully like you did with Gangster Boss or Kei.

I think you have the record for using Azure so many times in a single chapter.

One of the dumbest chapters I have ever read. I almost dropped the story.

In a previous review I criticized the description of the story since it was not very good. However, since then the author has changed the description to be much better. I have deleted my previous review.

Well it worked. Now your Story description is really good.

The story is really good so far, and so much better then 99% of stories on this site. Its always weird seeing garbage novels highly rated, while good novels have poorer ratings.

He says that his skin is white in like the second chapter.

I really like all the med knowledge.

This novel needs to have its Synopsis rewritten, and to add a bunch of Tags. This novel would be in the top 10 easy if it had a better Synopsis. Its nothing like I thought it would be.